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[PC] planetarian ~the reverie of a little planet~ - "Gentle Jena" by Static

Started by Zeta, March 28, 2021, 02:09:43 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: planetarian ~the reverie of a little planet~
Console: PC
Title: Gentle Jena
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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Static


Libera

Looks good, just some small things:

-VGMdb has this titled as 'Gentle Jena -Starlit Night-'.
-The beam in bar 1 looks a little steep.  I'd recommend making it somewhat shallower.
-The masking in bar 5, while cool, seems totally unnecessary to me.  You could just move that dynamic to the right and it would be fine.

Static

Quote from: Libera on April 07, 2021, 10:19:10 AM-VGMdb has this titled as 'Gentle Jena -Starlit Night-'.
That's the soundtrack for the anime adaptation and movie, this is the one for the visual novel.

The other things have been adjusted

Libera

Quote from: Static on April 07, 2021, 10:33:30 AMThat's the soundtrack for the anime adaptation and movie, this is the one for the visual novel.

Thanks, I hate it.

Quote from: Static on April 07, 2021, 10:33:30 AMThe other things have been adjusted

Cool.

Latios212

This looks great :P

Just... one tiny thing. Is there supposed to be an apostrophe in VisualArt's?
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Static

Quote from: Latios212 on April 07, 2021, 04:28:09 PMIs there supposed to be an apostrophe in VisualArt's?
There used to be, but I think they changed it to "Visual Arts" now, with the space as well.

Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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