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Author Topic: [GBC] Mario Tennis - "Dormitory" by Nine Lives  (Read 220 times)

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[GBC] Mario Tennis - "Dormitory" by Nine Lives
« on: April 04, 2021, 07:47:56 PM »

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Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario Tennis
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Dormitory
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nine Lives
« Last Edit: April 10, 2021, 11:03:41 PM by NineLives »
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Re: [GBC] Mario Tennis - "Dormitory" by Nine Lives
« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2021, 07:48:34 PM »

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Re: [GBC] Mario Tennis - "Dormitory" by Nine Lives
« Reply #2 on: April 10, 2021, 03:57:20 PM »

Hey, nice work!

Couple things:
- I would recommend adding another measure system. It seems a bit cramped as it is. One idea would be to add an additional 4 measure system, which would make all of them have 5 measures (excluding the last one) instead of 6 measures like it currently is.
- M. 17-24 (LH): According to the original, these notes all sound staccato'ed.
- The entire RH is quite legato/smooth. You could make a performer's note specifying that. However, totally up to you!

Notes sound good. That's all I have in the moment.
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Re: [GBC] Mario Tennis - "Dormitory" by Nine Lives
« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2021, 11:03:12 PM »

Mkay. I got the sheet updated!
- The entire RH is quite legato/smooth. You could make a performer's note specifying that. However, totally up to you!
I added a few slurs for this, mostly over the eighth notes since the smoothness is more apparent for them.
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Re: [GBC] Mario Tennis - "Dormitory" by Nine Lives
« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2021, 05:27:42 PM »

Nothing to add from me. Looks good :)
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Re: [GBC] Mario Tennis - "Dormitory" by Nine Lives
« Reply #5 on: April 11, 2021, 08:04:47 PM »

Sweet!
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Re: [GBC] Mario Tennis - "Dormitory" by Nine Lives
« Reply #6 on: April 11, 2021, 08:04:54 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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