[GBC] Mario Tennis - "Courtyard" by Nine Lives

Started by Zeta, April 03, 2021, 01:34:23 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario Tennis
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Courtyard
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nine Lives

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Sebastian

Heyyy, nice work.  8)

Just a few things I noticed:

- For some reason, the Finale file has all the staccatos colliding with the notes; however, the PDF looks fine. 
- Measures 23 & 25 (LH): From what I'm hearing in the original, the rests probably aren't necessary. It sounds like the notes are sustained from one to the next with no space in between.
- Along the same vein as above, the last note of 23 and 25 (LH) sounds extended by 1-2 beats of the next measure. Right now, you have it being held for only the length of an 8th note.
- The LH in measure 12 sounds legato. Granted, I am using PC speakers, not headphones. xD

That's all that catches my eye at the moment. Notes sound accurate.



NineLives

Quote from: Sebastian on April 03, 2021, 01:53:19 PM- For some reason, the Finale file has all the staccatos colliding with the notes; however, the PDF looks fine.
I believe it's just a Finale v26 conversion thing, so it looks fine for me, but may look wonky on your version.
Quote from: Sebastian on April 03, 2021, 01:53:19 PM- The LH in measure 12 sounds legato. Granted, I am using PC speakers, not headphones. xD
The notes sound the same here as they do in the previous measures from what I hear. Aside from that, I made the other couple of changes.

Latios212

This would fit very nicely one one page if you use 5 measures per system (with one system having 6 measures, perhaps the fourth system). The music is pretty sparse, so no concern about things becoming too cramped.

That's about it from me, everything checks out.
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Latios212

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