[GBC] Mario Tennis - "Dormitory" by Nine Lives

Started by Zeta, April 04, 2021, 11:47:56 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario Tennis
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Dormitory
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nine Lives

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NineLives


Sebastian

Hey, nice work!

Couple things:
- I would recommend adding another measure system. It seems a bit cramped as it is. One idea would be to add an additional 4 measure system, which would make all of them have 5 measures (excluding the last one) instead of 6 measures like it currently is.
- M. 17-24 (LH): According to the original, these notes all sound staccato'ed.
- The entire RH is quite legato/smooth. You could make a performer's note specifying that. However, totally up to you!

Notes sound good. That's all I have in the moment.



NineLives

Mkay. I got the sheet updated!
Quote from: Sebastian on April 10, 2021, 07:57:20 AM- The entire RH is quite legato/smooth. You could make a performer's note specifying that. However, totally up to you!
I added a few slurs for this, mostly over the eighth notes since the smoothness is more apparent for them.

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