[PC] Momodora: Reverie Under the Moonlight - "Pardoner's Dance" by Maelstrom

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Momodora: Reverie Under the Moonlight
Console: PC
Title: Pardoner's Dance
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Maelstrom

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[Maelstrom]

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• m10 RH beat 1: Middle note should be D instead of B.
• m11 RH: Middle note should be G instead of Ab. There should also be an Eb under the G.
• m20 LH beat 2: Top note should be D.
• m26 RH beat 2: Lower note should be Eb (also applies to m34 LH beat 2 Layer 1).
• m61 LH: I only hear the lowest octave, not the one above.

[Maelstrom]

all done, thanks for taking a look

[Static]

m26 RH beat 2: Lower note should be Eb (also applies to m34 LH beat 2 Layer 1).

m34 looks the same as before, but everything else looks good

[Maelstrom]

oops

fixed

[Static]

Looks nice

[Latios212]

Just a quick passing thought: you could try distributing this as 5 systems on the first page and 6 on the second to use the space more evenly.

[Libera]

In addition to the above, which I agree with:

-The bass note on beat 3 of bar 32 and 40 sounds like it should be a Bb, just like in bar 24.
-I can hear a C below the RH Ebs in bar 57, just like in 55-56.

Also, the video you linked doesn't have the repeat.  Does it repeat like that in game?  (Just checking.)

Otherwise, looks good!

[Maelstrom]

Yep, it loops like that. I pulled up some gameplay to double check.

I hear an F in the RH Ebs in m57 now....
Tell me what you think about that.
Discussed over discord and I agree with libera now.

Everything else is fixed and updated.

[Libera]

Talked to Maelstrom and I've adjusted the spacing on the second page very slightly to use the white space more evenly.

Everything is ready to go, so I'll accept!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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