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Author Topic: LeviR.star's Colors Sheet - [GG] Sonic Chaos - "Turquoise Hill Zone"  (Read 909 times)

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Here's the sole sheet I'll be contributing towards the Colors Update, the first zone theme from Game Gear version of Sonic Chaos:



[GG] Sonic Chaos - "Turquoise Hill Zone"

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« Last Edit: July 29, 2021, 02:09:47 AM by LeviR.star »
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Re: LeviR.star's Colors Sheet - [GG] Sonic Chaos - "Turquoise Hill Zone"
« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2021, 02:48:50 PM »

I don't see this in the Dropbox folder and that zip link 404s. Did you cancel it?

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Re: LeviR.star's Colors Sheet - [GG] Sonic Chaos - "Turquoise Hill Zone"
« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2021, 02:19:09 AM »

Sorry, Gav, it turns out I didn't have shared access to the folder, so it wasn't actually syncing my sheet through. This should be resolved now!
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Re: LeviR.star's Colors Sheet - [GG] Sonic Chaos - "Turquoise Hill Zone"
« Reply #3 on: September 01, 2021, 10:05:12 AM »

Nice work on this one!

-m. 1 and 9: I'd renotate the first two beats enharmonically so it outlines a F-Bb-Eb quartal chord (so all E#'s become Fn's, all A#'s become Bb's. all D#'s become Eb's, etc). The Fn's and E's are more natural to read, and it works better in a descending line like this (Eb-D-Db in the top notes instead of D#-D-Db)
-m. 8 L.H.: Beats 3.25 and 3.75 should be F# and E (instead of A and F#)
-m. 12 R.H.: I'd rewrite the Eb as D# (#4 in the A major chord instead of b5 - or 6 instead of b7 in F#m)
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Re: LeviR.star's Colors Sheet - [GG] Sonic Chaos - "Turquoise Hill Zone"
« Reply #4 on: September 18, 2021, 08:46:24 PM »

Again x2, Levi isn't able to make edits at the moment and so asked me to.

-m. 1 and 9: I'd renotate the first two beats enharmonically so it outlines a F-Bb-Eb quartal chord (so all E#'s become Fn's, all A#'s become Bb's. all D#'s become Eb's, etc). The Fn's and E's are more natural to read, and it works better in a descending line like this (Eb-D-Db in the top notes instead of D#-D-Db)
-m. 8 L.H.: Beats 3.25 and 3.75 should be F# and E (instead of A and F#)
-m. 12 R.H.: I'd rewrite the Eb as D# (#4 in the A major chord instead of b5 - or 6 instead of b7 in F#m)

I fixed all of these, hopefully.  I also changed the Dn grace in bar 12 to a C## to match with bar 16.

The other edit I made was adding in a second time ending for the repeated section.  Bar 15 is not the same the second time around.  Unfortunately, this meant the sheet had to go to three pages, so I also adjusted the spacings and system distribution to account for this.

I have updated the file in the dropbox and have nothing else to add.  Approved.

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Re: LeviR.star's Colors Sheet - [GG] Sonic Chaos - "Turquoise Hill Zone"
« Reply #5 on: September 21, 2021, 07:41:59 PM »

Nice! The first ending just needed to be extended to m15, as it started at m17 now, but I fixed that for you too! I had to move the accidentals a bit too as my version of Finale is a bit older, but this should be alright. If there does seem to be a problem, just ping me!
With that said, I'll accept this!
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