[PS1] Xenogears - "Where the Egg of Dreams Hatches" by Libera

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Submission Information:
Series: Xeno
Game: Xenogears
Console: PlayStation
Title: Where the Egg of Dreams Hatches
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera

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[Libera]

[Static]

Always glad to see more Xenogears

• m2 RH beat 3.5: It sounds like the D is restruck here.
• m11 RH beat 3: I hear an E above the C#
• The half rests in m16/20 RH should be hidden
• m17 RH: While there is a G in the RH, it doesn't actually resolve up there. It only resolves to the lower F#.

Nice arrangement

[Libera]

The half rests in m16/20 RH should be hidden

Whoops.

m17 RH: While there is a G in the RH, it doesn't actually resolve up there. It only resolves to the lower F#.

Not sure I can hear the G that is up there, but the G I wrote in was just the lower G -> F# moved up to fit into the RH.

The other two things I changed as well.  Thanks for checking.

[Static]

Not sure I can hear the G that is up there, but the G I wrote in was just the lower G -> F# moved up to fit into the RH.

I hear the G, but not the F#, but if you wrote it to double the LH then that's fine.

The rest is good too, so I'll approve

[Latios212]

Always glad to see more Xenogears

- m. 9 beat 2 RH is misaligned, and I'm hearing C instead of D
- rit. in m. 13 is a bit far to the right. Also should probably be a fermata in the LH on beat 4 to match the RH?
- I'm finding the voicing in some of the measures in the second page to be a bit confusing. I see in m. 14 the high voice combines with the lower layer for the second half which is alright I guess. But for m. 16 it's a bit unclear at the top voice does this:
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I'd suggest keeping the high woodwind voice on top, stemmed up there. Also for m. 20, the beat 4 octaves should be flipped downwards.

[Libera]

- m. 9 beat 2 RH is misaligned, and I'm hearing C instead of D

It is misaligned, but I definitely hear a D there.  There's a C elsewhere, already written in to the left hand.

The other stuff should be adjusted/fixed.  I also misaligned the second layer in bar 17 to make it a bit clear what's going on there.

Thanks for having a look.

[Latios212]

Alrighty, looks good!

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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