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Author Topic: [NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore & Andrea Licheri  (Read 486 times)

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Series: Other
Game: The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Stage Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: Jacopo Tore & Andrea Licheri
« Last Edit: October 16, 2021, 04:38:00 PM by JacopoTore »
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Looks pretty good overall! Here's some feedback:

You currently have very few articulations on this sheet. This song actually has quite a bit of articulation, but the video you linked has this annoying reverb effect which makes it really hard to hear the decay of the notes. Try listening to this video instead and see if you can pick some of the articulations out⁠—for example, the LH should be staccato for the entire sheet, except for the 16th run in m21 (you could add a slur there).

-m1-2 RH could use an 8va marking. This would also free up more room for the composer/arranger text, which is crowding the title currently.
-m10 LH beat 3 the B should be up an octave and in the RH.
-m11 LH doesn't look super playable at speed, I think raising the top line an octave and putting it in the RH like you did with m2 would be much more manageable.
-Tempo should be 180 bpm (it's playing back as 180, but the marking says 120?)
-I think mf would be a more appropriate dynamic.
-You're missing a repeat direction at the end of the sheet; in this case it should be a D.S. with a segno in m3.
-I'd suggest changing the title to "Stage Theme", since that seems to be the most commonly accepted title online.
« Last Edit: August 11, 2021, 10:38:02 PM by Radiak488417 »
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-m10 LH beat 3 the B should be up an octave and in the RH.


I have problems at this point, can you explain to me which plug-in to use and how to set it up? To make sure that the G remains in the left hand
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I just meant like this, no need to use any plugins haha

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I just meant like this, no need to use any plugins haha


haha
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-m11 LH doesn't look super playable at speed, I think raising the top line an octave and putting it in the RH like you did with m2 would be much more manageable.
Did you give this a look?
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haha
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Ah I didn't see that you updated the files, sorry about that!

This is looking really nice! There are still some articulations you're missing in the A section, for example in m3 RH all notes should be staccato except for beat 1 and beat 3. Other than that, here's some formatting stuff:

-The composer/arranger info and title are still looking a bit cramped, I would move the title up and the composer/arranger info down so that they aren't intersecting, and reduce the amount of space between the titles and subtitles. You could also remove or squish the slur in m2 to make even more space, but I understand if you want to keep it the way it is.
-Tempo text could be moved down a bit
-The start of the 8va in m1 could be moved a little bit to the left. Additionally, it doesn't need to extend all the way to the end of m2, just to the final notes.
-The segno in m3 should be centered over the barline.
-The volta bracket in m18-19 is disconnected a tiny bit, it should be a continuous line.
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Did it! Thank you!
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