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Author Topic: [PC] Minecraft - "Sweden" by PlayfulPiano  (Read 1180 times)

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Re: [PC] Minecraft - "Sweden" by PlayfulPiano
« Reply #15 on: August 29, 2021, 04:57:07 AM »

This is a wonderful sheet - great job Playful for writing it out and many thanks to MSF, Zeila, and others on Discord for the feedback and help polishing it up. The notes look right and I agree with all of the voicing/articulation decisions made.

I only have some minor visual feedback before we call this one done :P
- Fix the page 2 margins to match page 1. Moving the header within the 0.5" top margin also means less vertical space on page 2 - you may be able to move the top/bottom staff slightly closer together (maybe to a distance of around 1.05"-1.1") in the first and second systems while making sure the dynamics are centered between staves
- Move the left end of the crescendo in the beginning right a bit so it's not so close to the ppp (similar in 23)
- Staccato missing in m. 24 beat 3 top layer
- The dim. in the last system is too close to the stems in m. 35-36. A couple of ways you could deal with this are to increase the LH/RH staff gap or use a text "dim." instead. But what I would suggest is starting the hairpin diminuendo later. It doesn't sound to me in the original that it starts until roughly the middle of measure 36.
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Re: [PC] Minecraft - "Sweden" by PlayfulPiano
« Reply #16 on: August 29, 2021, 05:03:35 AM »

Looks gooooood
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Re: [PC] Minecraft - "Sweden" by PlayfulPiano
« Reply #17 on: August 29, 2021, 05:03:40 AM »

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