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Author Topic: [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Credits" (Replacement) by Nine Lives  (Read 192 times)

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[SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Credits" (Replacement) by Nine Lives
« on: October 13, 2021, 12:30:07 AM »

Submission Information:

Series: Mario Kart
Game: Super Mario Kart
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Credits
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nine Lives


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
« Last Edit: November 13, 2021, 02:34:59 AM by NineLives »
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Re: [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Credits" (Replacement) by Nine Lives
« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2021, 12:35:10 AM »

I know some sources call the piece "Credits," but I've also seen it titled as "Ending" as well. If it's easier to update by changing the title to "Credits," I'll swap them.

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Re: [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Credits" (Replacement) by Nine Lives
« Reply #2 on: October 13, 2021, 02:25:34 AM »

Ooh, we needed this one badly. Thanks for being the brave soul to replace it!
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Re: [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Credits" (Replacement) by Nine Lives
« Reply #3 on: November 12, 2021, 12:23:26 PM »

Nice work!

- It sounds like there's a gradual build-up for the first 4 measures instead of starting at mf straight away, and it also sounds like there's a bit less energy in measure 5 compared to the end of measure 4. For example, you could start it off with p, crescendo up to forte by the end of measure 4, and then put mf at measure 5. If you think there are better ways to represent it then go ahead, but I think it needs something more than just mf
- I think this could also use some more dynamic variation from m37-end
- m1/3 I'm unsure but it sounds like the C in the second layer is struck again on beat 3
- m5-14 and other spots, the rhythm is inconsistent on beat 2 because some measures will have a staccato eighth note and others will have a sixteenth note. Is there any particular reason why they are different? Also in measure 14 the two sixteenth notes should be beamed together if that's what you're going to go with
- m30 the Ab in the last chord sounds like it goes down to a G
- m45-47 I think you should write an 8va here instead of leaving the chords of m46/47 so high up
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Re: [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Credits" (Replacement) by Nine Lives
« Reply #4 on: November 13, 2021, 02:34:59 AM »

- m1/3 I'm unsure but it sounds like the C in the second layer is struck again on beat 3
I hear it tied throughout. Both layers have the same instrument/sound though, so I can see how that can be misinterpreted.
Aside from that, everything's accounted for from your reply, unless I missed something.
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