[GCN] Doubutsu no Mori e+ - "Reset Surveillance Center" by Static

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Animal Crossing
Game: Doubutsu no Mori e+
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Reset Surveillance Center
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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[Static]

Last time I checked, this isn't on YouTube, so here's a rip directly from the game.

There are no official track titles for this game, so I picked this one based on what the building is called in City Folk and New Leaf, which I think would help people find it.

[Zeila]

The phrase where the E starts on beat 4.5 of m6/14/20 messes with my brain

- missing dynamic
- idk what happened but the measure numbers are off

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[close]

- it sounds like there's a missing Bb on beat 1 in the bass for m17/19/21
- the 7th/9th dyads of measures 18, 20, and 22 sound like they come on beat 1 instead of beat 3

[Static]

Everything should be fixed now, plus some additional changes. The measure number thing was because I had originally copied this from my other Resetti sheet without changing the numbers back.

[Latios212]

The measure number thing was because I had originally copied this from my other Resetti sheet without changing the numbers back.

you mean you didn't resetti the numbers

[Latios212]

I have nothing to add, this looks great

[Bloop]

I don't have anything to say about the notes either, looks great! There's just two things I thought about:
-I'm not sure if a key signature is that necessary here, as the track doesn't seem really feel that much like Bb-major (or lydian-mixolydian I guess). It's really just there for the low Bb's every few bars.
-Maybe you could consider raising the notes of the higher knocks one or two stave lines, so the player may think about finding something to knock on that sounds higher.

[Static]

I basically hear that lydian-mixolydian/acoustic scale vibe with the tonic as Bb, so it still sounds major to my ear at least. The melody itself outlines the scale. For the percussion, since I just kept it to one knock (instead of multiple types written on different lines/spaces), the pitch is ambiguous imo regardless of what line it's on. For a performance, almost anything that's knocked on would work fine. I think I'd rather just keep it as it is.

[Bloop]

Alright, that sounds logical! In that case, I'll accept this!
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