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Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby Battle Royale
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Apple Scramble
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212

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[Latios212]

The original version of the Apple Juice Song

[Static]

• m2 RH beat 4: You could add the lower harmony if you want here (Ab-G), although it's fine without it too.
• m40 LH beat 3: I think this is an A instead of E

That's all I got

[Latios212]

m2 RH beat 4: You could add the lower harmony if you want here (Ab-G), although it's fine without it too.

Sure, doesn't hurt. Easy enough to omit if it's annoying to play (I probably would)

m40 LH beat 3: I think this is an A instead of E

Ah yep. Wasn't sure what octave but I've put it up for a more natural-feeling transition back to m. 3. I've also put an accent on it.

Aside from that, I also put an 8va above m. 31-32 since it's rather high. Files updated, thanks for the feedback!

[Static]

Looks good

[Libera]

The only thing I noticed is that I don't hear the G in bar 27 beat 4.  It sounds just an A chord there to me. 

I guess you could also add the C#s at the beginning in the RH on beats 2/4/6 etc.

Otherwise looks great.

[Latios212]

The only thing I noticed is that I don't hear the G in bar 27 beat 4.  It sounds just an A chord there to me. 

Ah yeah I think you're right. Changed it to an A!

I guess you could also add the C#s at the beginning in the RH on beats 2/4/6 etc.

I could, but I'd rather not. It's not an easy jump back and forth, and the right hand octaves would be better off sustained the full length of the quarter rather than lifting early to hit a C# on the offbeats.

Thanks for checking, files updated!

[Libera]

Looks good.  Accepted!

[Zeta]

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