[PC] Symphonic Rain - "Feel the Rain" by Latios212

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Symphonic Rain
Console: PC
Title: Feel the Rain
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212

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[Latios212]

Note - The timing for m. 10/48 is pretty loose; I wouldn't mind adding some performance direction text there but wasn't sure what to write.

[XiaoMigros]

Might not be exactly what you're after, but if you beam all the notes in that measure together it would imply a more harp-like part.
Otherwise I would write "loosely" and/or "harp like".

[Static]

• Maybe put a fermata in m9/47, it's held for longer than 3 beats.
• m3/7/30/etc. LH beat 3: The A sounds like it should be an octave higher.
• For m10/48, I think what you have will already probably be interpreted rather loosely. I'd leave it, but you could put "freely" there.

I think that's all I have to say, this is great

[Latios212]

Might not be exactly what you're after, but if you beam all the notes in that measure together it would imply a more harp-like part.
Otherwise I would write "loosely" and/or "harp like".

Ahh sorry I didn't reply earlier!! I thought about that a bit but I think the way it currently is is a little nice to look at because it's the same 4-note pattern repeated 3 times in 3/4. I hope the slur helps communicate that this is just one long phrase though. As for the verbal direction...

• Maybe put a fermata in m9/47, it's held for longer than 3 beats.
• m3/7/30/etc. LH beat 3: The A sounds like it should be an octave higher.
• For m10/48, I think what you have will already probably be interpreted rather loosely. I'd leave it, but you could put "freely" there.

I think that's all I have to say, this is great

Yep, yep, and yep, I think "freely" works nicely.

Thanks for the feedback! Files updated

[Static]

Nice, approved

[Bloop]

-m13, 21, 51 and 59: I don't hear a C in the R.H. here
-m16 and 54: There's a G from the harp on beat 3.5
-m45: L.H. beat 1.5 should be an E

That's all though, looking nice!

[Latios212]

-m13, 21, 51 and 59: I don't hear a C in the R.H. here

I changed them to D to keep the triads!

-m16 and 54: There's a G from the harp on beat 3.5

I intentionally omitted this because it'd audibly interfere with the main melody more than I'd like.

-m45: L.H. beat 1.5 should be an E

Ah good catch. Tracks on this OST as a whole have parts that sound repeated but not exactly the same...

Files updated, thanks for checking!

[Bloop]

I intentionally omitted this because it'd audibly interfere with the main melody more than I'd like.

I see, that makes sense ^^

Then I'll accept!
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