[NES] Dr. Mario - "VS Game Over" (Replacement) by Nine Lives

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Dr. Mario
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: VS Game Over
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nine Lives


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[NineLives]

So, for those wondering about the title change, the original sheet was called "Versus Victory," which is the title given by fans and many YouTube channels that post video game music, but the official title, as seen here, is "VS Game Over."

[Bloop]

-The song is in E major, so the key signature should have 4 sharps
-m1 + pickup: I hear the L.H. an octave higher. Also, the Cn should be a B# (the third of G# major)
-Throughout the whole song, the bass note on beat 2.5 should be a half step below the next note (which will mean quite a lot of double sharps: Fx before G#, B# before C#, and Cx before D#). The only exceptions to this are the measures that have the bass start on F# (like m13)

That's all my comments though, everything else looks good!

[NineLives]

Everything should be up to date!

[Bloop]

You forgot the Cn to B# in the first measure ^^ And I just noticed that the pick up measure is currently included in the measure numbering, but it shouldn't be. Everything else looks good!

[NineLives]

You forgot the Cn to B# in the first measure

Sorry about that! Got it fixed along with the other thing!

[Bloop]

Awesome! I'll approve!
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[Libera]

What does 'Festively Disease-Free' mean?

I think the 8vas could be a little closer to the notes in bars 19/21/23/25, but otherwise I think this looks good to me.

[NineLives]

The sheet has been updated!

What does 'Festively Disease-Free' mean?

I was trying to come up with a creative way to describe the theme of the song. I thought it was a fairly festive-sounding victory theme and since it played when one of the players destroyed all the germs, or diseases, in their jar, I combined the two in that phrase. That was the thought process.

[Libera]

Hmm, ok.

Well, I'll accept.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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