[PC] Deltarune - "Another Day in Hometown" by Wuuthrad

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Submission Information:
Series: Undertale/Deltarune
Game: Deltarune
Console: PC
Title: Another Day in Hometown
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Wuuthrad

[Wuuthrad]

Hope it's alright to start submitting new Deltarune stuff!

There's unfortunately various errors in the Musescore -> Finale Notepad conversion which I'm not sure if I can fix on my end - a fair amount of beamings seem to be too close together or overlapped into different staves, and there's some different places where I had parentheses around notes that were removed (A4s in the LH on the 1st beat 8th note stacattos for measures 32-37, A5 in the RH on measure 64). Had to also mess around with the octaves just for better playability in places like 28-31 and 40-46, and tried to notate multiple voices but would be open if there's better ways of writing them.

[Saava yu Adrin]

Just paying attention to the RH, I'm not in the best place to notice errors with the LH atm. If a part gets echoed later on, I've only written down a note for the first time.

• I think you have beats 2 and 2.5 in m2 swapped, I hear F D A B D D.
• I would only put staccatos on m4 3.5, m10 3, m11 3.5, m32 2 (and similar). Maybe it's because the higher register means things naturally lengthen a bit, so I'd want someone to correct me on that if I'm wrong.
• m6 4.5 could be tied into the next measure
• m7 3 is a dotted quarter note
• It looks like the 8va on m28 starts on 2.5 but seems to really start on 2.75. This is probably not intentional, and should be an easy fix.
• Does m31 have to be split into two voices? They could be combined into one there.
• Why have the LH play so far into what the RH is doing on m32, m33, and m35? Better to just give it all to the RH. Also, the same treatment is missing from 36, which is odd, I hear the A on 1 there too

[SH_AspKing]

Already errors in measure 2 where the A and B are swapped, also the abbrieviated piano after the first system should be removed through Musescore..there are many more mistakes to list.

[Latios212]

Already errors in measure 2 where the A and B are swapped, also the abbrieviated piano after the first system should be removed through Musescore..there are many more mistakes to list.

Hey, just a reminder to please be kind when giving feedback... just saying "there are a lot of mistakes" isn't constructive either. The melody notes were also already pointed out above.