Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time Re:Told (Discussion)

Started by K-NiGhT, February 12, 2012, 09:05:14 AM

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K-NiGhT

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 28, 2015, 06:48:06 PM
what are you doing stop making nsm a better place by spreading happiness

Nebbles

Not bad! Just a small suggestion, I'd try to add a little more detail when the characters are speaking (like using said over and over - try to fix that) but otherwise I can't wait to read the rest :3
Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

K-NiGhT

Quote from: Nebbles on February 12, 2012, 03:12:01 PMNot bad! Just a small suggestion, I'd try to add a little more detail when the characters are speaking (like using said over and over - try to fix that) but otherwise I can't wait to read the rest :3
Thanks for your comment! Yeah that's my only problem in writing lately.

Btw i have like thru chapter 7 done xD
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 28, 2015, 06:48:06 PM
what are you doing stop making nsm a better place by spreading happiness

fingerz

Classical / Jazz / Contemporary
Performer / Arranger / Educator
Bb, A, C & Bass Clarinet / Soprano, Alto, Tenor & Baritone Saxophone / Basset Horn

Nebbles

Quote from: xK-NiGhTx on February 12, 2012, 03:13:43 PMThanks for your comment! Yeah that's my only problem in writing lately.

Btw i have like thru chapter 7 done xD

If you want I could help you out a bit :o
Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

K-NiGhT

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 28, 2015, 06:48:06 PM
what are you doing stop making nsm a better place by spreading happiness

Bespinben

I've read ALOT of PMD fanfictions of the years (yay Serebii.net forums ::)), so my standards for what I could consider a "good" PMD fanfic might be somewhat high. There is really nothing wrong with your fanfic Night, it's quite nice, but I simply could not help but yawn when I quickly discovered it was, for the most part, a narrated version of the in-game script. Chapter 7's departure caught my interest though  ;)
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

K-NiGhT

The reason i'm using the main story is because i'm actually writing it for my girlfriend who loved PMD 1 but never got around to PMD2.
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 28, 2015, 06:48:06 PM
what are you doing stop making nsm a better place by spreading happiness

SlowPokemon

Great! I love the mystery dungeon storyline.

KN, totally read my story "will to go on" since you read DrP's!
Quote from: Tobbeh99 on April 21, 2016, 02:56:11 PM
Fuck logic, that shit is boring, lame and does not always support my opinions.

Arceus79

You should continue this! I would love to keep reading!

Master of Wind: Arceus79

K-NiGhT

Meh I gave up. It's pretty much a re-telling of the story but with some extra plot points.
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 28, 2015, 06:48:06 PM
what are you doing stop making nsm a better place by spreading happiness

Arceus79

Yeah, but it is really interesting! I played Sky, but this is actually different with speech and a lot of other aspects, and I found that I enjoyed it!

Master of Wind: Arceus79

K-NiGhT

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 28, 2015, 06:48:06 PM
what are you doing stop making nsm a better place by spreading happiness

K-NiGhT

UPDATE!

I just realized I totally forgot about this. I'm going to pick this back up in the off-season of the other story. I know, it's just the main story, but I'm also working on extra plot points!
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 28, 2015, 06:48:06 PM
what are you doing stop making nsm a better place by spreading happiness

Nebbles

Did you still want me to write the special episodes or something? XD I swear we had a discussion on this.

That, or I could make the sister fic and do PMD 1...
Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel