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??? (New Story/Story Discussion Thread)
« on: November 13, 2013, 08:30:20 AM »

TABLE OF CONTENTS:
Chapter One - Begin

Students Still Alive = 15 (Don't click on this if you're not up to date)
Nicholas Montague
Leah Vesicle
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Re: ??? (New Story/Story Discussion Thread)
« Reply #1 on: November 13, 2013, 08:31:06 AM »

Update #1: Begin

I woke up.

Immediately, I got ready for school in the morning, I made breakfast, brushed my teeth, and made my bed; but when it came to putting my clothes on, I put away my normal uniform and got my swimsuit and loud clothes out. You see, today was the day where our class went to the Solar Park; it was the last day of middle school, and we went there to celebrate.

After getting dressed, I packed my bag and exited my house. It was a 5 minute walk to school, and I took the time to look around and see my surroundings.

The streets were busy, and there were people everywhere, I noticed them, but then forgot about them a few seconds later. They were ordinary; no particular talents, not famous or well known. Like Me.

Maybe, people consider me more light hearted and optimistic than other people.

After a few miles, I arrived at school. The Bus was already there, and people were crowded around it. “Hey, Nick! Come over Here!” One of the students shouted at me.

Oh, right, I forgot. My Name is Nicholas Montague, born to Catherine and Benvolio Montague. Like I said earlier, there was nothing interesting about me.

I followed the student’s instructions, and joined the line; in front of me was the resident beauty, Leah Vesicle. She was amazing; she was wearing a formal dress, blue in colour. Her Hair was let down all the way, and from what I could see, there were –

While I was distracted and monologuing about how beautiful she was; about 10 guys pushed me out of the way so they could talk to her.

Suddenly, the bus doors opened and students literally ran in in droves, trying to race to the back seats.

I calmly walked into the bus, and took a window seat by myself near the middle front of the bus. Around a minute or two later, the bus started.

I relaxed, and started looking out the window, there was city, and then farmland, and I was looking at some pretty sheep when I heard scratching in front of me.

It turned out that Vesicle was in front of me, putting some sketches into her book, she was an artist, and probably the best in the school if not the entire town, and I then started thinking about how beautiful she was again, right before someone to my right fell out of his bus chair.

He was asleep, and when the teacher attempted to wake him up, he kept snoring. Behind me, I felt someone slumping their head on my chair. I then let out a yawn.

I then saw people falling asleep all around the bus, seemingly simultaneously; a few seconds later, my body shut down.

My last thoughts before I lost consciousness were of confusion, and wondering about what was happening.
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Re: ??? (New Story/Story Discussion Thread)
« Reply #2 on: November 13, 2013, 08:31:52 AM »

Oh yeah, you can discuss the story in this topic if you like.
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Re: ??? (New Story/Story Discussion Thread)
« Reply #3 on: December 24, 2013, 03:09:16 AM »

I woke up.

I stood up, looking around; it seemed to me that I was in a classroom, there was a blackboard with random words in front of me, and desks/chairs to all sides of me. The windows; or what seemed like windows, to the left of me were boarded with steel. Looking up, I saw security cameras, eager to watch my every move.

Slightly unnerved, I left the room, and entered a hallway.

It was almost exactly like the hallways at my school, lockers on the walls, security cameras lined on the corners, classrooms spread evenly around the place. But whatever I tried, all of the classrooms were locked.

I continued down the hallway, trying to open doors, but none of them would open. I noticed that some of the lockers had nonsensical writing on them, such as NEW WORLD ORDER, or WELCOME TO DESPAIR; unnerved by these, I continued down the hallway.

I reached the end of the hallway, and saw two huge double doors, behind them I heard people talking. I stood there for a few minutes, wondering whether I should go in or not. I made up my mind, and decided to go in.

To see 14 people, near exactly like me.
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