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Author Topic: [MOB] Fire Emblem Heroes - "Breeze of Askr" by Libera  (Read 179 times)

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[MOB] Fire Emblem Heroes - "Breeze of Askr" by Libera
« on: October 13, 2022, 05:44:18 PM »

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Series: Fire Emblem
Game: Fire Emblem Heroes
Console: Mobile
Title: Breeze of Askr
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera
« Last Edit: November 20, 2022, 06:57:14 PM by Libera »
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Re: [MOB] Fire Emblem Heroes - "Breeze of Askr" by Libera
« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2022, 05:45:02 PM »

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Re: [MOB] Fire Emblem Heroes - "Breeze of Askr" by Libera
« Reply #2 on: November 20, 2022, 12:13:34 PM »

-Maybe you could add a staccato marking at the L.H. in m1 and m58? For the middle section you could add 'con pedale' or 'legato' at m25, but the change in accompaniment is probably enough to notice that the staccato marking wouldn't apply here anymore.
-m25-26 and 29-30: I think the G in m25 and Bb in m29 on beat 3 should be tied over in the next bar, considering the softer piano part as the melody rhythm
-m43: This R.H. chords is pretty stretchy between the C and F (3rd and 4th finger) while holding the top A, maybe you could delete the C since it's in the L.H. as well?
-m58: I don't think it's possible to hold the low G in this bar: the chord itself is doable with the thumb on both the F and G, but you either have to hold both of them or make both of them staccato.
-m59-65: I hear these chords differently with a G as the top note: not sure exactly what they are, but they kinda sound like D-F-G and D-Eb-G?
-m65: I hear a Bb on beat 1 in the L.H. instead of G (but the G is still there on beat 3)
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Re: [MOB] Fire Emblem Heroes - "Breeze of Askr" by Libera
« Reply #3 on: November 20, 2022, 06:57:20 PM »

-Maybe you could add a staccato marking at the L.H. in m1 and m58? For the middle section you could add 'con pedale' or 'legato' at m25, but the change in accompaniment is probably enough to notice that the staccato marking wouldn't apply here anymore.
-m43: This R.H. chords is pretty stretchy between the C and F (3rd and 4th finger) while holding the top A, maybe you could delete the C since it's in the L.H. as well?
-m58: I don't think it's possible to hold the low G in this bar: the chord itself is doable with the thumb on both the F and G, but you either have to hold both of them or make both of them staccato.
-m65: I hear a Bb on beat 1 in the L.H. instead of G (but the G is still there on beat 3)

^Should all be fixed!

-m25-26 and 29-30: I think the G in m25 and Bb in m29 on beat 3 should be tied over in the next bar, considering the softer piano part as the melody rhythm

Hmm I was really going off of the strings playing these notes and I think it makes more sense to restrike here based on how those parts sound to me.

-m59-65: I hear these chords differently with a G as the top note: not sure exactly what they are, but they kinda sound like D-F-G and D-Eb-G?

I don't really want to put the G at the top because of the melody in bar 58, but I can just add in the G everywhere in these chords?  Does that work for you?

Thanks again for checking!

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Re: [MOB] Fire Emblem Heroes - "Breeze of Askr" by Libera
« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2022, 02:38:25 PM »

Hmm I was really going off of the strings playing these notes and I think it makes more sense to restrike here based on how those parts sound to me.
Yeah it's kinda hard to hear if the strings really restrike or not, but I can hear what you mean.

I don't really want to put the G at the top because of the melody in bar 58, but I can just add in the G everywhere in these chords?  Does that work for you?
You could also change the chords from m59 on instead, kinda like how you moved some notes up an octave in the part at m9 for the melody, but this works too I think ^^

You're also only missing this one:
-m43: This R.H. chords is pretty stretchy between the C and F (3rd and 4th finger) while holding the top A, maybe you could delete the C since it's in the L.H. as well?
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Re: [MOB] Fire Emblem Heroes - "Breeze of Askr" by Libera
« Reply #5 on: Today at 02:04:28 PM »

You could also change the chords from m59 on instead, kinda like how you moved some notes up an octave in the part at m9 for the melody, but this works too I think ^^

I'm kind of forced to do this in the beginning but since I can get away with making it consistent at the end I would prefer to, I think.

You're also only missing this one:

Oh sorry I read that and thought about it but forgot to post about it.  My intention there was for the player to not hold onto the top A and move down to the chord.  I think with some pedalling you can get that A to sustain without needing to hold it.

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Re: [MOB] Fire Emblem Heroes - "Breeze of Askr" by Libera
« Reply #6 on: Today at 04:14:19 PM »

My intention there was for the player to not hold onto the top A and move down to the chord.  I think with some pedalling you can get that A to sustain without needing to hold it.
Wouldn't that also hold the Bb in the L.H. or cause a break there?

Also, just noticed the last two quarter rests in the L.H. of m41 should be a half rest, but aside from that it looks good!
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