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Samusthedude

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Samusthedude's 1st arrangement
« on: November 18, 2019, 07:32:45 PM »

Hey all, just finished formatting an arrangement. Any feedback would be appreciated.

The piece is Corridor from Persona 4 for ps2.

(.musx for newest finale)
(Pdf)
(.mus for older finale)

Here's the original for comparison
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Re: Samusthedude's 1st arrangement
« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2019, 01:39:34 AM »

Ooh wow, great job for a first sheet, and nice to see more Persona stuff!

Just taking a glance at the moment, but overall this is quite clean and accurate. Some of the right hand quarter notes in the beginning section should be triads though - for instance, m. 1 is missing F on top, m. 2 is missing E on top, m. 5 is missing B flat. Give them another look to double check you've got all the pitches.

Hope to see more! :)
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