[SNES] Super Mario RPG - "Geno Awakens" (Replacement) by mariolegofan

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario RPG
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Geno Awakens
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Sebastian]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yuww-R_I_wU

[King Sammer]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yuww-R_I_wU

Real nice!

[Sebastian]

Off 2nd page.

[Sebastian]

I got that "file info" fixed on this one that Olimar was talking about.

[Bespinben]

This is a very pretty sheet! I'm really glad you've graduated from Notepad. Saves me a lot of trouble.

*Now that I know you can, would adjust the spacing of the systems on the front page so there isn't all that unused white space at the bottom of the page?
*M. 20 ~ The parentheses around the LH chord should be outside the dot, not inside. You did it correct everywhere else, interestingly.
*I found your measure distribution inconsistent starting from m. 22 to m. 38, especially with the m. 33-36 all scrunched together in one system. Do what you think should be done.
*M. 31-38 ~ As far as playing this passage goes, there's a lot jumping-size intervals in the LH that could be minimized by throwing some of the top notes of those arpeggios to the RH.

[Sebastian]

*M. 20 ~ The parentheses around the LH chord should be outside the dot, not inside. You did it correct everywhere else, interestingly.
*I found your measure distribution inconsistent starting from m. 22 to m. 38, especially with the m. 33-36 all scrunched together in one system. Do what you think should be done.
*M. 31-38 ~ As far as playing this passage goes, there's a lot jumping-size intervals in the LH that could be minimized by throwing some of the top notes of those arpeggios to the RH.

Fixed.

*Now that I know you can, would adjust the spacing of the systems on the front page so there isn't all that unused white space at the bottom of the page?

How?

[Bespinben]

Select Staff Tool, then grab the handles left of the systems. To make the spacing adjustment even among all the systems, I usually Shift+click each system and then use the arrow keys.

Also, your new measure layout, while consistent, is not intelligible (see m. 23). Find the right balance. Mostly, I was just saying don't arbitrarily have 2 measure system and then a 4 measure system. M. 23 needs two measures because of the space the key signature occupies. In fact, I would make everything involving measures 23-30 in a 2 measure system.

[Sebastian]

Ok Thanks! I'll have that fixed in a minute.....

[Sebastian]

Select Staff Tool, then grab the handles left of the systems. To make the spacing adjustment even among all the systems, I usually Shift+click each system and then use the arrow keys.

Also, your new measure layout, while consistent, is not intelligible (see m. 23). Find the right balance. Mostly, I was just saying don't arbitrarily have 2 measure system and then a 4 measure system. M. 23 needs two measures because of the space the key signature occupies. In fact, I would make everything involving measures 23-30 in a 2 measure system.

Ok! All fixed!

[Sebastian]

Ok! All fixed!

*cough*

[Olimar12345]

-Your title, subtitle, and mini page-top titles are out of alignment. highlight them and press Ctrl + Shift + '

-From measure 27 through measure 30, there is a reoccurring wrong note in the RH. the seventh eighth note "B" (as well as it's pick up grace note) should be A#. fix this for all four of those measures.

-Remove all of the staccato duro marks (. + ^) from measures 31 to the end. That's the last kind of articulation that note needs (it's originally a tremolo). I'd say just leave it as a quarter note.


Oh, and please no more annoying and unnecessary bumps. This was fine:

Ok! All fixed!

[Sebastian]

All fixed!

[Sebastian]

I GOT EVERYTHING FIXED! 

[Sebastian]

Goshdarnit already. Is this one ready to go already??