Arrangement Sheets (Dream Theater)

Started by DreamTheater123, July 24, 2015, 05:36:57 PM

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DreamTheater123

Here is my first arrangement!
A few things I couldn't figure out to do. At measure 13, the glissando isn't working. I want the dynamics for the right hand to be forte all the way to the end and the left hand to be pianissimo all the way, but that's not working properly either.
Noki Bay
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Tobbeh99

Nice!

if you want a better text for the dropbox link use this method:
{url=url}writewhatyouwanthere{/url}
replace every { and } with [ and ].

if done correctly you can get this result:

Noki Bay
or something else you like to write here

some feedback:

The notes looks a bit squeezed a certain places, I'm not a notepad expert so I don't know how to fix that.
Also measure 9, the triplets should be a trill I think.
measure 13. That's not how you write a trill. This is how
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[close]
or just a "tr" above the note.
Quote from: Dudeman on August 16, 2016, 06:11:42 AM
tfw you get schooled in English grammar by a guy whose first language is not English

10/10 tobbeh

Brawler4Ever

To separate the notes, I add a dotted whole note to each measure. It doesn't add anything to the song, but it separates the notes. No idea why, but it's always worked for me. You'll get the error sound, but it separates the notes anyway. If you try it on measure 10, you can see what I mean.
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DreamTheater123

Quote from: Tobbeh99 on July 26, 2015, 05:33:36 AMNice!

if you want a better text for the dropbox link use this method:
{url=url}writewhatyouwanthere{/url}
replace every { and } with [ and ].

if done correctly you can get this result:

Noki Bay
or something else you like to write here

some feedback:

The notes looks a bit squeezed a certain places, I'm not a notepad expert so I don't know how to fix that.
Also measure 9, the triplets should be a trill I think.
measure 13. That's not how you write a trill. This is how
Spoiler
[close]
or just a "tr" above the note.

Thank you very much. That helped a lot and made it much better.

DreamTheater123

Quote from: Brawler4Ever on July 26, 2015, 09:19:27 AMTo separate the notes, I add a dotted whole note to each measure. It doesn't add anything to the song, but it separates the notes. No idea why, but it's always worked for me. You'll get the error sound, but it separates the notes anyway. If you try it on measure 10, you can see what I mean.
That worked! Thanks.