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Author Topic: [DELETED] [PC] Undertale - "Power of -NEO-" by Yugikun  (Read 1533 times)

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[DELETED] [PC] Undertale - "Power of -NEO-" by Yugikun
« on: December 03, 2015, 05:30:01 AM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Power of -NEO-
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yugikun
« Last Edit: December 05, 2015, 12:21:04 AM by Yugi »
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Re: [PC] Undertale - ""Power of -NEO-"" by Yugikun
« Reply #1 on: December 03, 2015, 05:50:44 AM »

Two things:

(1) Consecutive dotted values -- As a corollary to the "always show beat 3" rhythm notation practice, you also shouldn't have back-to-back dotted values in a 4/4 time. You should spell the rhythm as follows:


There is though a certain appeal to the way you have written it (3+3+3+3+2+2). If you wish to keep it this way, you should write the piece in an additive time signature such as 8/8 (i.e. [3+3+2]/8).



(2) You're missing harmonies in the RH. It's not just melody octaves.
« Last Edit: December 03, 2015, 05:54:02 AM by Bespinben »
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Re: [PC] Undertale - ""Power of -NEO-"" by Yugikun
« Reply #2 on: December 04, 2015, 01:42:22 AM »

^^

Shouldn't the time signature be 16/16(3+3+3+3+2+2)?? 8/8 is 3+3+2. ... or wait both works, but 16/16 makes every note on beat, while 8/8 makes some notes of beat (sort of like 3 against 2). 

Also I don't know if changing key signature for measure 5-8 might make it easier to read.
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Re: [PC] Undertale - ""Power of -NEO-"" by Yugikun
« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2015, 06:58:31 AM »

Also I don't know if changing key signature for measure 5-8 might make it easier to read.

Speaking of which, the initial key signature is C# minor (4 sharps), not F# minor (3 sharps). It modulates up a half step to D minor (1 flat) in m. 5-8.
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Re: [PC] Undertale - "Power of -NEO-" by Yugikun
« Reply #4 on: December 13, 2015, 04:34:26 AM »

*poke for Yugi*
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Re: [PC] Undertale - "Power of -NEO-" by Yugikun
« Reply #5 on: December 31, 2015, 05:33:41 AM »

With this now being an official project, EVERYONE REMOVE YOUR UNDERTALE SUBMISSIONS AND INSTEAD POST THEM HERE.

Free up your submissions for other pieces and get your Undertale arrangements all in one spot here:

http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7974.0
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