[3DS] Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon - "Sticky Situation" by BrainyLucario

Started by Zeta, April 02, 2017, 08:32:31 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Sticky Situation
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario

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Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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joeberryosponge

Overall I think you should change the sharps to flats in most cases. I feels weird to see thirds and it playing as a major second. B sharps shouldn't be necessary as C is already in the key. Also, I am hearing a D instead of an F in the Bass line in the second measure and others like it. Other than that, it seems fine.

Sebastian

Brainy and I looked this one over on Skype.
Things we fixed:
- We changed some of the note durations around to match the original and help the performer.
- Added some expressions to help better mimic the clarinet in the original.
- Changed some incorrect notes in the left hand.
- Fixed some incorrect accidental spellings throughout the arrangement.
- Re-arranged some left hand notes and inverted some chords to help with playability and clashing with the right hand.
- Got rid of the unnecessary key change.
- Did some other general formatting odds and ends.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/qp60gu9i4r9ibkk/Sticky%20Situation.musx?dl=1




Latios212

I've updated the files! But on a quick glance, I see a bunch of B naturals in the first half that should be C flats.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Sebastian

Any specific reason they should be Cbs? I usually don't like putting Cbs in the key of C minor, but since it's a descending pattern I guess it wouldn't hurt. If you do change them, maybe go ahead and change the C#s to Dbs in that section too (most notably M. 14 and M. 22).



BrainyLucario

I'll get to work on fixing this. I appreciate it not being deleted
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Sebastian




FireArrow

Quote from: Sebastian on June 07, 2017, 06:47:20 AMAny specific reason they should be Cbs? I usually don't like putting Cbs in the key of C minor, but since it's a descending pattern I guess it wouldn't hurt. If you do change them, maybe go ahead and change the C#s to Dbs in that section too (most notably M. 14 and M. 22).

Think of key signatures as a way of figuring out chords, not accidentals. In C minor has the dominant chord G so B natures are going to be a lot more common than C flats, but if said note isn't part of a G chord, then it could very well be a Cb if the chord or chromaticism calls for it.
Quote from: Dudeman on January 23, 2017, 05:35:59 PM
straight from the department of redundancy department

BrainyLucario

When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Maelstrom


BrainyLucario

My computer broke so I literally have like 20 minutes to do sheet music in the morning at school. Haven't forgotten. (Also I have like 4 sheets in progress so I'm basically all over the place.)
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Maelstrom

Seb edited it a bit more and updated the files, and I approve of this.

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Zeta