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Submission Information:
Series: Final Fantasy
Game: Final Fantasy IV
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Fanfare
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Dakook

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[LeviR.star]

Whoa, that was fast.

Here, Dakook, I fixed a couple things, which include your tempo marking and 8vb. Is this correct?

[Maelstrom]

Bump for arranger

[Dakook]

Yes, this is correct. Thank you!

[LeviR.star]

Good. Now, all you have to do is update your files through the NSM Panel. Use the one I provided for you.

[Dakook]

Okay, I have updated the files.

[Maelstrom]

[Dakook]

Was I supposed to have posted the original...? Or is there some other reason you posted that here?

[Maelstrom]

That's why

[Latios212]

Nice. just a couple of things:
- Needs an opening dynamic.
- The pickup measure sounds like it should only be one voice instead of being octave doubled. This would also make it immensely easier to play.

[Olimar12345]

These errors need to be addressed:

-You've left out the bass voice and instead have doubled the tenor. It is entirely possible to have both.
-Please do not use the transposing octave clefs in piano music, use and 8vb or ledger lines.
-The rhythm on the down beat one in measure 2 should be a triplet in both hands, not a dotted eighth-sixteenth.
-A courtesy natural sign would be helpful on that first E in measure 2.
-The use of the staccato with the tenuto mark seems like overkill, especially since in most cases it is used while the opposite hand is using a regular staccato. I would suggest just using staccato.


Other than that, it's good. Below are the changes I mentioned in an updated version:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/wngucuv4r294y5x/Victory%20Fanfare12345.mus?dl=1

[Yug_Guy]

Small nitpick - the official title for this song is "Fanfare".

[Latios212]

Dakook has granted permission to edit the files, so we're good here!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot