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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Sunshine
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Pinna Park
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Mitch Norris

[Olimar12345]

[FireArrow]

ooooh I like it

[Olimar12345]

Few small things need to be addressed:

-There's a prominent C# on the down beat of measure 3 (RH) that is absent.
-The octave A's in measure 22 (RH) should be a single fourth-line D.
-Measure 23 should end with an E on the up beat of 2, preceded by a D the sixteenth note before that.
-Measure 39's layer 2 sixteenth notes should only be a single eighth note.
-Measure 40's LH bass line is incorrect.

Other than that, I like it. The absent harmonies seem strategically chosen to provide a more approachable arrangement, making it much less awkward to play than a piece like this needs to be. Below is a version of the arrangement with the changes listed above.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5b3i4678kqc1nw6/%5BGCN%5D%20-%20Super%20Mario%20Sunshine%20-%20Pinna%20Park%20-%20WheelmanMitch12345.mus?dl=1

[Deku Trombonist]

It's very clean...almost too clean in some ways for me. I'd personally love to see an arrangement with more 'wrong' stuff in it, something captures the Country Band March vibe a bit more. The original does sound pretty wonky after all.

But it is a good arrangement nonetheless and it does what it does well. Those were more musings than criticisms.

[Sebastian]

Nice work, guys. Looks good to me.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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