[SNES] Final Fantasy IV - "Fanfare" by Dakook

Started by Zeta, September 09, 2017, 07:50:06 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Final Fantasy
Game: Final Fantasy IV
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Fanfare
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Dakook

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LeviR.star

#1
Whoa, that was fast.

Here, Dakook, I fixed a couple things, which include your tempo marking and 8vb. Is this correct?
Check out my Youtube channel for remixes and original music! LeviR.star's Remixes

Also check out my piano arrangements here on my PA thread! LeviR.star's Arrangements

Maelstrom


Dakook

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LeviR.star

Good. Now, all you have to do is update your files through the NSM Panel. Use the one I provided for you.
Check out my Youtube channel for remixes and original music! LeviR.star's Remixes

Also check out my piano arrangements here on my PA thread! LeviR.star's Arrangements

Dakook

Meet me on MuseScore: https://musescore.com/dakook_music

Maelstrom


Dakook

Was I supposed to have posted the original...? Or is there some other reason you posted that here?
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Maelstrom


Latios212

Nice. just a couple of things:
- Needs an opening dynamic.
- The pickup measure sounds like it should only be one voice instead of being octave doubled. This would also make it immensely easier to play.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Olimar12345

These errors need to be addressed:

-You've left out the bass voice and instead have doubled the tenor. It is entirely possible to have both.
-Please do not use the transposing octave clefs in piano music, use and 8vb or ledger lines.
-The rhythm on the down beat one in measure 2 should be a triplet in both hands, not a dotted eighth-sixteenth.
-A courtesy natural sign would be helpful on that first E in measure 2.
-The use of the staccato with the tenuto mark seems like overkill, especially since in most cases it is used while the opposite hand is using a regular staccato. I would suggest just using staccato.


Other than that, it's good. Below are the changes I mentioned in an updated version:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/wngucuv4r294y5x/Victory%20Fanfare12345.mus?dl=1
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Latios212

Dakook has granted permission to edit the files, so we're good here!
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Zeta

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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