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Author Topic: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars  (Read 457 times)

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[NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« on: November 08, 2017, 09:22:26 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Sweet Home
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Cave Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars
« Last Edit: January 24, 2018, 08:52:45 PM by Rwars »
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #1 on: November 08, 2017, 09:32:33 PM »

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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #2 on: November 14, 2017, 02:45:12 AM »

Whoooo...interesting sheet. :P

Here are a few things:
- You're missing a dynamic marking.
- The last low B in each measure (LH) should mirror the RH making it a D.
- The spellings are a little awkward. Since there isn't a discernable key (to me at least), these accidentals may work better:

- From what I can tell from the original, M.4+ is faster than M. 1-3.

Whew...weird song. Does anyone else have any thoughts on this one? Updaters?
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #3 on: November 14, 2017, 04:01:25 AM »



If you beam it differently and respell some accidentals it shows up something interesting.

There are the following arpeggios: Abm, D, Fmin, Bmin (I'm assuming the transcription is correct). If you just take the roots of the arpeggios, you have four notes which spell a diminished chord (B, D, F, Ab). And seeing as diminished chords can resolve any of four ways, that's why there is seemingly no 'discernable key'.

I'm sure you could probably tinker with the spellings a bit to find an optimal spelling, but I just thought it was an interesting little quirk that was worth pointing out.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #4 on: November 14, 2017, 06:14:54 PM »

I've reworked the spellings, and finally added the dynamic mark. Don't know how that escaped me the first time around.

- From what I can tell from the original, M.4+ is faster than M. 1-3.
You seem to be correct, it does speed up a bit there, actually. I'm not sure on what it speeds up to, though.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #5 on: November 14, 2017, 07:44:17 PM »

Awesome.
We, the Updaters, have discussed it and have come to a consensus.

Go ahead and change the time signature to 12/16 and beam it this way. Also, change the Cb to a B#. That was my bad.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #6 on: November 15, 2017, 02:06:51 AM »

There we go. Changed the remaining flats into sharps, and changed the time signature. Anything else, perhaps?
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #7 on: January 04, 2018, 06:28:38 PM »

Updated to have with what I believe is the correct tempo and tempo change. I do hope that this is correct.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #8 on: January 23, 2018, 12:53:58 AM »

I have to disagree with Sebastian's suggested spellings, as they don't make nearly as much sense as the method Deku provided (I'm looking at YOU, written diminished fourth (G#-C) instead the incredibly easier-to-read/interpret major third!).

This is the way I'd go:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/t4om17vco5pdrju/cave12345.mus?dl=1
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #9 on: January 23, 2018, 06:18:14 PM »

Well, there we go, I changed the spelling back. I do hope that this is better, perhaps?
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #10 on: January 23, 2018, 06:23:26 PM »

Yep.

A couple final notes:
- Could we have a forward repeat bar at measure 1 and use a DC instead of a end repeat bar at the end?
- Now that we've changed the time signature, the tempo marking needs to be updated to have a dotted eighth note as the beat (instead of quarter note).
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #11 on: January 24, 2018, 09:30:19 PM »

And there we go, hopefully that works, haha
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #12 on: January 24, 2018, 09:38:36 PM »

I have to disagree with Sebastian's suggested spellings, as they don't make nearly as much sense as the method Deku provided (I'm looking at YOU, written diminished fourth (G#-C) instead the incredibly easier-to-read/interpret major third!).
Static and I came up with that spelling. I do agree that a major third is easier to read.


Nice work, guys.
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Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
« Reply #13 on: January 24, 2018, 09:38:43 PM »

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