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Author Topic: [NDS] The Legend of Zelda: Phantom Hourglass - "Ciela's Parting Words" by Rudolf Milter  (Read 350 times)

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Submission Information:

Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Phantom Hourglass
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Ciela's Parting Words
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rudolf Milter
« Last Edit: December 30, 2017, 04:01:13 AM by Latios212 »
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(This applies to both of your arrangements)
Before we begin the sheet review process, you'll need to make your PDF from your .mus file, and thus bring your .mus up to the site formatting standards, which you can find here:
http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0

If you need to do things your version of finale cannot, ask here:
http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=685.0

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Okay, so do I need to reupload them to the same place when they are corrected?
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Yes, just edit this submission to do so. Then post a message letting us know that the files have been updated.
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I have updated it.
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Nice job!
Here is a file with a few changes. They were only minor changes. You can replace the files in the original post with these.
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/crez0q7qsfnj3u6/AAA-Z929jtupUHwwZTPxX6Bya?dl=1


Things I changed:
- Brought the metronome marking up a tad.
- Here on NSM, we require at least one dynamic marking on each sheet. I added one.
- I beamed some of the ledger line notes down to the bottom staff to make reading the notes easier.
- Added some courtesy accidentals.
- Added measure numbers.
- Fixed some wrong notes in M. 17+ (the Bbs to As).
- Deitalicized the copyright info.
- Spruced up the formatting a bit.

Again, nice work!
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Nice! I have replaced it.

And thanks!
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Very nice work. Just one thing - this makes use of Koji Kondo's original "Great Fairy Fountain" composition, and to the best of what I can find Toru Minegishi arranged this, so please update the composer info accordingly to say "Composed by Koji Kondo and Toru Minegishi" (multiple lines). (Or just let me know if I can grab that for you since it's really quick.)

Also, small addendum: if you want your name to appear "Rudolf Milter" (with a space) on the sheet and on site, change your arranger name under your forum profile to match.
« Last Edit: December 29, 2017, 01:39:44 AM by Latios212 »
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Done, including the thing about the composer name.
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Almost there - the second composer is Toru Minegishi. Put this on a new line so that it doesn't start creeping under the title information.
« Last Edit: December 29, 2017, 05:07:39 AM by Latios212 »
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Corrected!
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Err... not quite. The composer name was still wrong. But I went ahead and fixed that for you.

Congrats on getting your first sheet accepted!
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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot
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