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Author Topic: [3DS] The Legend of Zelda: A Link Between Worlds - "Minigame" by Beta  (Read 820 times)

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Re: [3DS] The Legend of Zelda: A Link Between Worlds - "Minigame" by Beta
« Reply #15 on: April 10, 2018, 01:54:04 PM »

Really nice. Few more small things and we'll be done here.

-Composer/arranger names and copyright info are not aligned.
-The second page title and page number aren't properly aligned for some reason... Did you import this from another software? Weird...
-RH measure 4 last note in the bar should be a third-space C.
-RH measure 6 E natural needs to be an Eb.
-RH measure 14 E natural needs to be an Eb.
-RH measure 18 E natural needs to be an Eb.
-LH measure 8 last note in the bar should be a C above the staff. The last rest also needs to be adjusted.
-LH measure 10 E natural needs to be an Eb.
-LH layer 1 measure 10 last note in the bar should be a C above the staff. I might even suggest that it be moved up an octave and put in the RH since the line continues in that register. Your call there.
-LH layer 2 measure 10 I would recommend raising those F's up an octave. The last one needs to be a second-space C btw.
-Any particular reason you changed the chord at the end of the bar in 14 (LH)? Beats three and four sound the same in the recording...

This file contains all of the changes listed above. Hope it helps
https://www.dropbox.com/s/e9fi9w0ecjq528i/Minigame12345.mus?dl=1

Thanks for making those changes! I've updated the files!
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Re: [3DS] The Legend of Zelda: A Link Between Worlds - "Minigame" by Beta
« Reply #16 on: April 10, 2018, 03:48:12 PM »

Cool, we gud.
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Re: [3DS] The Legend of Zelda: A Link Between Worlds - "Minigame" by Beta
« Reply #17 on: April 10, 2018, 03:48:21 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Olimar12345.

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