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Author Topic: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter  (Read 501 times)

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[Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« on: February 10, 2018, 08:20:53 PM »

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Series: Other
Game: Rhythm Heaven Fever
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Micro-Row
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter
« Last Edit: April 05, 2018, 03:53:46 AM by Bespinben »
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2018, 08:21:17 PM »

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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2018, 02:46:32 AM »

Nice work; looks good overall.

For consideration, have you considered retaining two voices in the left hand for the beginning section like below? It might help it sound less empty.

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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2018, 03:05:42 AM »

Yeah, I had originally attempted that, but messed it up. I fixed it, updated the files, and all that jazz. Well, all that upbeat genre-ambiguous music, more likely.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #4 on: February 13, 2018, 05:17:51 AM »

Oof, the formatting got messed up...

That's okay, we can fix that later. For now, part of the reason I suggested that left hand pattern was to make that part at measure 19 less awkward. Go ahead and update that in a similar manner.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #5 on: February 18, 2018, 02:58:46 PM »

Oh, I think I see what you mean by the formatting messed up. Sadly, as far as I know, I can not fix that myself. I updated measure 19 and 20.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #6 on: February 22, 2018, 04:28:17 AM »

m.60 - I'd make it more clear when the melody comes in (right now it's almost indistinguishable from the accompaniment, even with the beam break)
Bass notes clash with copyright on PDF
m.27 1st RH melody note should be F# not A
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #7 on: February 22, 2018, 04:35:04 AM »

Bass notes clash with copyright on PDF
Yeah, that's already been established. Sadly, that's not a problem I can fix, cause Notepad. As for everything else, I'll take care of it as soon as I can.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #8 on: February 22, 2018, 10:51:19 PM »

Alright, I've updated the files.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #9 on: April 03, 2018, 05:12:40 AM »

Don't wanna be this guy, but



It's been over a month, I'm well within my right to do this... Maybe.

Sorry.

I feel really bad now. Forgive me, please.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #10 on: April 03, 2018, 06:48:21 AM »

Arrangement looks fine to me. However, I think the layout could be much better optimized. Instead of squishing as many systems as possible onto every single page (which has resulted in huge amounts of unused whitespace on page 3), spread it out evenly over the 3 pages you're using. In fact, if you did 5 systems on page 1, you could fit 6 systems on pages 2 and 3 each, creating a nicely balanced and evenly filled layout.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #11 on: April 05, 2018, 02:09:21 AM »

Alrighty, taken care of! Thanks Wah for the formatting help! And now just to wait a few more months.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #12 on: April 05, 2018, 03:04:48 AM »

Careful, you just might jinx it.

Thanks to both of you for doing that. I noticed a few micro-irregularities with the layout though, so I fixed those real quick. Ideally, you want the top and bottom systems to align horizontally across page spreads, and you also usually want to space systems evenly on the same page.
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Here's the file with those fixes:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/9extaoe2dbi7iea/micro-row.mus?dl=0
« Last Edit: April 05, 2018, 03:12:11 AM by Bespinben »
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #13 on: April 05, 2018, 03:14:55 AM »

Alrighty, I'll take care of that tomorrow as soon as I can get on my computer and remember I need to do it.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #14 on: April 05, 2018, 03:41:33 AM »

Well it needs an MUSX too, so it'd probably be easier if I just uploaded it. This is how it looks:

« Last Edit: April 05, 2018, 03:56:30 AM by Bespinben »
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