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Author Topic: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64  (Read 740 times)

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[Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« on: February 21, 2018, 07:59:58 PM »

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Series: Other
Game: Rhythm Heaven Fever
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Shrimp Shuffle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: WaluigiTime64
« Last Edit: June 03, 2018, 01:46:21 AM by WaluigiTime64 »
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2018, 08:02:07 PM »


A fun, simple one. Did some bullshitting somewhere though, as the original transcription ruined the tonality a bit.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #2 on: March 03, 2018, 09:51:39 PM »

Bump.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2018, 08:17:55 PM »

I think the bassline doesn't capture the oomph of the original. If you're ok with that, it's your arrangement.
However, I think it might be better if it was something like this:
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2018, 10:15:51 PM »

I think the bassline doesn't capture the oomph of the original. If you're ok with that, it's your arrangement.
That's fair enough I guess.

However, I think it might be better if it was something like this:
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Ah M.9-16. With that section (and the similar one at the end), I intentionally made it less loud and bouncy taking the whole piece into consideration. Without it, there's not enough of the contrast present in the original imo.
I still had a listen to what you offered regardless, but it seems awfully difficult, and there's too much clutter in the bass (just a personal thing, other people quite like that). Typically I wouldn't pair mezzoforte with staccato'd 4-note chords in the bass.

Thanks for the suggestion anyway.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #5 on: March 17, 2018, 10:33:06 PM »

Fair enough.

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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #6 on: April 04, 2018, 08:19:56 AM »

Bump I guess.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #7 on: April 15, 2018, 10:36:57 AM »

Bump again, I suppose.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #8 on: April 26, 2018, 03:51:16 PM »

I've fully checked the song, and aside from my gripes about the bassline in that part, I only found one issue: you put staccato marks on dotted notes. Yes, it may make the sheet cleaner, but those are two additions to the note that affect each other in opposite ways. What good does a dot do when its goal is to lengthen the note, but the staccato's job is to shorten it? Try writing them as something else with rests also thrown in.

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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #9 on: May 08, 2018, 06:48:31 PM »

@waluigi: If you'd like to go ahead and respond to Mael's comment, I think we'll be finished here.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #10 on: May 25, 2018, 02:10:28 PM »

Bump for Waluigi.
@waluigi: If you'd like to go ahead and respond to Mael's comment, I think we'll be finished here.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #11 on: May 29, 2018, 12:21:08 PM »

Very sorry for the extremely late reply, but I won't have enough free time for this until Friday afternoon, and I need a decent amount of time to work with the feedback without it looking horrendous (to my eyes, anyway).
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #12 on: May 29, 2018, 03:06:26 PM »

No prob. Take your time.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #13 on: June 01, 2018, 12:20:05 PM »

I'm not a huge fan of how it looks now, and I'm still not really convinced by the staccato-dotted-note argument, but it's updated with the suggestion regardless.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Shrimp Shuffle" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #14 on: June 01, 2018, 05:25:56 PM »

Just so you know, the notes can still be quarters with staccatos. Or 8ths with staccatos. The main point is that staccatos and dotted notes don't mix. I had a good 30 minute discussion about this a while back and I can point you to some people who can discuss it better than I can if you want. (mainly latios and olimar)
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