[NDS] WarioWare: Touched! - "Ashley's Song" by BrainyLucario

Started by Zeta, April 04, 2018, 12:50:42 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: WarioWare: Touched!
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Ashley's Song
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario

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BrainyLucario

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ThatHiddenCharacter

#2
Big thing I noticed that needs to be changed, the section in F# major/D# minor is in straights, not swing like the rest of the song.
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BrainyLucario

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ThatHiddenCharacter

Then ask help from someone who has the full version of Finale. There are plenty of people on the forums that I'm sure would be glad to help. Don't just say you can't do it and a) give up or b) say it's good enough. I've never let road blocks like this get in my way, and I know you are smart enough to not let this get in your way. Persevere Brainy, persevere!
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Latios212

Quote from: ThatHiddenCharacter on April 04, 2018, 05:32:16 PMThen ask help from someone who has the full version of Finale. There are plenty of people on the forums that I'm sure would be glad to help. Don't just say you can't do it and a) give up or b) say it's good enough. I've never let road blocks like this get in my way, and I know you are smart enough to not let this get in your way. Persevere Brainy, persevere!
Now this guy's got the right idea
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BrainyLucario

Quote from: ThatHiddenCharacter on April 04, 2018, 05:32:16 PMThen ask help from someone who has the full version of Finale. There are plenty of people on the forums that I'm sure would be glad to help. Don't just say you can't do it and a) give up or b) say it's good enough. I've never let road blocks like this get in my way, and I know you are smart enough to not let this get in your way. Persevere Brainy, persevere!
Oh I know, that was me asking for help secretly. If no one noticed it I would've asked Olimar or Sebastian to help
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Olimar12345

Quote from: BrainyLucario on April 04, 2018, 07:15:38 PMOh I know, that was me asking for help secretly. If no one noticed it I would've asked Olimar or Sebastian to help

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BrainyLucario

When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

BrainyLucario

When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

BrainyLucario

Nobody completed the second verse. Sad. Anyways bump
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BrainyLucario

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LeviR.star

Not so much what the references hear vs. what you hear, but more of some polishing up of the lyrics you've written. Here's an example of what I mean:

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This could look much better as ASH - LEY!, with the first syllable stretching over beats 1 & 2. We could also try and figure out when to indicate a chorus line (such as that name pictured,) unless this is purely a solo; in that case, I'd try to mark some special kind of indication for how it might be sung with more contrast. I'm no expert at arranging vocal music, but I thought it might be worth throwing out there.
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BrainyLucario

I honestly feel like though it would look better, having it like A-ASH-LEY More clearly expresses how your supposed to stress the syllables when singing it. Also the choir chords thing are in the piano section down below. I felt that since this is a piano website the piano should be the focus to where the chords are not given to the voice. The contrast addition is beyond me, since I'm no expert in arranging vocal music either
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