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Show posts MenuQuote from: Static on December 20, 2020, 10:35:13 AMI agree with that, but some of the staccato placements are still inconsistent. Why are they below the notes in m13 but above in m14, when both layers are in the same ranges? Other than that, looks goodI suppose that makes sense. Fixed.
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 19, 2020, 10:07:14 AMEndless MinesAll done.
RH:
-m5/9 b1.5 - lowest note here is a G, not an A
-I think there's a restrike on b1 of m11/15
-m21 - b3.5 chord - top note should be an F#, not a C.
-m23 b4.5 - I hear a 8th note on C here, no 16th on D on b4.75
-m24 b1 - I recommend a staccato here
-m33 I think there should be some rests here after the 16th notes ....
LH:
m27:
-Maybe lower 1st layer rests to a normal height in m33?
Quote from: Static on December 19, 2020, 11:37:21 AMButtvilleI think it's pretty clear which notes the staccatos belong to, so there shouldn't be any confusion on the performer's part. All your other stuff has been fixed.
- Watch your staccato placement for RH Layer 1. Since most of the time you have 2 separate layers going on, I would suggest moving all staccatos above the notes instead of below.
Quote from: Static on December 15, 2020, 12:26:58 PMEndless MineDone
- For that rhythm starting in m2 RH, the first 8th note sounds like it should also be staccato.
- Consider inverting the dyads in Layer 2 in m18-21 and 29-31, unless you want the player to hold down the pedal or something.
Quote from: Latios212 on December 15, 2020, 03:24:07 PM- (My recommendation) condense the two lower voices into one for simplicity since most of the awkward intervals octave double the higher or lower note and do not add anything harmonically:I'm all for simplifying this arrangement. You can go ahead and use this version.
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Quote from: Maelstrom on December 09, 2020, 05:34:25 PMThe Great PyramidDone.
dotted tenuto
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 09, 2020, 05:34:25 PMBonus VictoryI already did. At least, it shows as being combined on my copy.
You didn't combine the rests?
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 09, 2020, 05:34:25 PMButtvilleI see what you mean now. That sort of beaming doesn't really bother me. But, no harm no foul.
Did you change any beaming aside from 18? Not sure if I'm missing something or not. You aren't compelled to by any means, but I'm not sure what was tried here.
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 09, 2020, 05:34:25 PMOpening themeDone & done.
I mean this:
could look like this:
Up to you to keep or fix tho, I could see this going either way.
Reset the rest heights on b2.5 of m7 and the like. not sure why they're so low.
Quote from: Maelstrom on November 18, 2020, 01:27:07 PMThe Great PyramidI don't think the R.H. are staccato. I think they're somewhere in-between non-articulated and staccato. If you know what kind of articulation would be good for that, I would love to hear it.
This song desperately needs some articulations. Places like m6 LH just don't sound the same with the slur-staccato pattern. Other suggestions include a dotted tenuto for b2 of LH m4 and and staccatos for the RH.
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 09, 2020, 09:31:20 AMBonus Game VictoryDone
Perhaps combine the quarter rests in the finale measure? The rest looks great.
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 09, 2020, 09:31:20 AMBonus Game VictoryI tried it. See what you think
Perhaps combine the quarter rests in the finale measure? The rest looks great.
Buttville
I'd recommend following the conventions on 8th beaming (only in sets of 4 when all on the beat and no rests), but the beaming of stuff like b1-2 of m18 and 3-4 of m33 is something I strongly recommend changing, at the very least.
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 09, 2020, 09:31:20 AMOpening themeNot sure what you're referring to here? Unless you just mean that there's general clutter, which I agree there is.
something about beaming over rests. there's no rest-8th-8th-rest so it's at least somewhat easier to parse but I'll still say it.
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 09, 2020, 09:31:20 AMm31-46 RH - I hear all top notes equally bended up, why are only some marked with grace notes?
Quote from: Yug_Guy on September 10, 2020, 04:29:21 PMBut, I feel like having a grace note for every note would get annoying really fast.
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 09, 2020, 09:31:20 AMm31 LH - I hear the bass guitar coming in on b1.5 here. Unsure if a restrike, but it feels like an intentionally delayed entry.Nah, I definitely hear it on beat 1.
Quote from: Static on September 20, 2020, 04:35:55 PMAccording to Wikipedia, the Eye in GoldenEye should be capitalized, and it appears like it should be on the boxart as well. You should change the titles on your sheets to reflect that.Done.
Quote from: Libera on October 31, 2020, 04:59:06 AMIt's not so much the quality, more that it randomly cuts out part way through the first loop which is a bit of pain. Anyway...Oh no. I didn't listen far enough into the original to know that it did that. I mean, I guess I could have just linked my own video, but I really don't want to be that guy...
Quote from: Libera on October 31, 2020, 04:59:06 AM-The run in bars 8 and 16 should be G# -> A -> B -> C ->D -> D# -> E.I'm still hearing what I have written there.
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