Submission Information:
Series: Undertale
Game: Deltarune
Console: PC
Title: Pandora Palace
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Bloop (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=1023)
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I think Deltarune is multiplatform, no?
Spoiler
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/765858407558152242/1025657297562775553/unknown.png
Notes:
- m21 b2.5-3 should be F-G instead of D-E
- m40&56 b2-3 should be C-G not B-C
Arrangement Choices/Formatting:
- For the first measure, on b3 the snare is hit in rapid succession, maybe a tremolo or something of the sort would do a better job of replicating that than a sustained dyad?
- m2-8: Beats 1-2.5 sound emptier than the original, it gives a slightly different rhythmic feel than the original. What do you think of including some of the other harpsichord notes (particularly the E on b1.5)? Also, the upper layer's rests can be moved down a little here.
- m39: The slur here needs adjusting.
- m43-end: the rests in the LH would also be better suited a bit within the staff imo
- I seem to remember the site using <Toby "Radiation" Fox> to list the composer, but maybe that can go either way.
Nice sheet, not much I'd have done differently
Quote from: XiaoMigros on September 30, 2022, 01:38:39 PMI think Deltarune is multiplatform, no?
We use the platforms of the initial release date for the console abbreviation, and Deltarune was released on PC a couple of months before PS4 and Switch.
Quote from: XiaoMigros on September 30, 2022, 01:38:39 PM- m21 b2.5-3 should be F-G instead of D-E
- m40&56 b2-3 should be C-G not B-C
Both fixed! I assume you meant C-D for m40&56
Quote from: XiaoMigros on September 30, 2022, 01:38:39 PM- For the first measure, on b3 the snare is hit in rapid succession, maybe a tremolo or something of the sort would do a better job of replicating that than a sustained dyad?
Good point! I just did two 16ths instead of a tremolo tho, since there are only two snare hits too.
Quote from: XiaoMigros on September 30, 2022, 01:38:39 PM- m2-8: Beats 1-2.5 sound emptier than the original, it gives a slightly different rhythmic feel than the original. What do you think of including some of the other harpsichord notes (particularly the E on b1.5)? Also, the upper layer's rests can be moved down a little here.
I actually decided to include an E on beat 2 instead, to imitate the snare hit. The extra harpsichord notes are on beat 1.5 and 3, but if I were to include those, it gets more of an alla breve 2/2 feel instead of the driving 4/4 of the drums.
Quote from: XiaoMigros on September 30, 2022, 01:38:39 PM- m43-end: the rests in the LH would also be better suited a bit within the staff imo
I lowered a few ones, but not all of them: in measures with a D or D# in the L.H., the rest on beat 1 will get pretty close to the note already (the one on beat 3 could technically be lowered, but I figured it'd be easier on the eyes to have them on the same height within a measure)
Quote from: XiaoMigros on September 30, 2022, 01:38:39 PM- I seem to remember the site using <Toby "Radiation" Fox> to list the composer, but maybe that can go either way.
I actually just didn't notice haha, apparently all my sheets and only my sheets on the site don't include "Radiation" in the composer title. I edited it here, and I'll get to changing the on-site ones another time!
Updated the files!
re: toby fox's name: he's changed his professional title from Toby "Radiation" Fox to just Toby Fox and apparently doesn't exactly like to be associated with his former handle.
I think a few rests throughout the piece might still be a bit high, but that's more personal preference than anything
I think that aside from that, the sheet is great
Ah, good to know haha, in that case I'll change it back and don't change the ones on site (since I already forgot I'd do that lol). I think I'd prefer not lowering any rests, since they'll either get close to other notes or aren't really consistent within sections or half measures.
Some things I noticed:
-Lots of missing notes in the opening few bars for the harpsichord. Intentional?
-Why drop the snare hits on beat 2 in bars 27+, like you had in the opening. It makes that section suddenly lose a lot of energy.
-Is this loop correct? I can't tell from the youtube link.
Quote from: Libera on December 07, 2022, 02:43:15 PM-Lots of missing notes in the opening few bars for the harpsichord. Intentional?
It took me some time to hear the D in the screenshot you mentioned on discord, but after playing it I think I'll keep all the extra notes out: they're a bit weird to play together with the held notes, and take away from the accents on the notes I do have.
Quote from: Libera on December 07, 2022, 02:43:15 PM-Why drop the snare hits on beat 2 in bars 27+, like you had in the opening. It makes that section suddenly lose a lot of energy.
I think I just forgot that part tbh, added those!
Quote from: Libera on December 07, 2022, 02:43:15 PM-Is this loop correct? I can't tell from the youtube link.
It is yeah, I remember checking a youtube video as well to hear the repeat.
Updated the files!
Cool, will accept then.
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).
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