Comments on A Story Written by TMP, Latios, and Trains

[TheMarioPianist]

I actually have to disagree. I think the ending was the best part! Hardly weak at all!   

I never said it was weak lol. I actually loved it. Just the image of Mario sitting forlornly on the side of an abandoned back road in the middle of Nevada brings tears to my eyes... *sniffle*

Thanks guys, that's making me feel a lot better! This is the first time I have actually even tried to write a story before. Like for fun, anyway. Because of that, I'm being overly critical of my own work. I should not worry about what I think and focus more on what you guys are saying. You guys say its good, so I'll take your word for it! Need to be less self-critical!

[ThatGamer]

Thanks guys, that's making me feel a lot better! This is the first time I have actually even tried to write a story before. Like for fun, anyway. Because of that, I'm being overly critical of my own work. I should not worry about what I think and focus more on what you guys are saying. You guys say its good, so I'll take your word for it! Need to be less self-critical!

You should ask Maestro what he thinks. He's the only one that matters. If he likes or dislikes it, it doesn't matter what we say. Because Maestro has spoken.

[TheMarioPianist]

Hey guys, Chapter 3 will have to wait until tomorrow. I have the whole plot for the chapter lined up, but I gotta watch Fear the Walking Dead sleep tonight since my first day of school is tomorrow. Thanks for your patience!

~TheMarioPianist

[ThatGamer]

Hey guys, Chapter 3 will have to wait until tomorrow. I have the whole plot for the chapter lined up, but I gotta watch Fear the Walking Dead sleep tonight since my first day of school is tomorrow. Thanks for your patience!

~TheMarioPianist

Have fun at school! Mine doesn't start until next week, so I'm still here!   

And have a nice..."sleep" 

[ThatGamer]

(Wait's patiently for more chapters)

[Dude]

You aren't waiting hard enough.

[ThatGamer]

You aren't waiting hard enough.

Come on, Dude, I've been waiting almost 4 days...

[Hero of Trains]

Patience! He just started school, too.

[ThatGamer]

Ah, that reminds me! Only ONE week until everyone (including me) starts school!

Where's that special person, anyways?...supposed to help with the story...that's why it's on hold...

[TheMarioPianist]

Come on, Dude, I've been waiting almost 4 days...

Ok, I should have made an official announcement. I didn't think I would really need to, but I have learned that I should have. Chapter 3 is on hold until further notice. It is not because I don't have the time (don't expect me to be cranking out chapters as fast as I did before school though...). It's because we have recently added a new member to the team (don't reveal, TG) and we are still working out a small thing with chapter 3. Trust me, it will be worth the delay...

Ninja'd like, a lot of times.

[ThatGamer]

Aw, that's too bad, I was looking forward to a new chapter. I guess I'm the only one who doesn't have every second of every day free...lol

I can keep waiting until the weekend! 

[mikey]

Ah, that reminds me! Only ONE week until everyone (including me) starts school!

not everyone

[TheMarioPianist]

Who said anything about the weekend? It's just whenever I feel the chapter is ready. And there's just one thing needed. Idk when it will be ready, we'll see.

[ThatGamer]

Who said anything about the weekend? It's just whenever I feel the chapter is ready. And there's just one thing needed. Idk when it will be ready, we'll see.

Oh, it will take more then a week? 

I should help write this lol get done quicker

[TheMarioPianist]

I meant less than a week...