[GBA] Pokémon Ruby Version & Pokémon Sapphire Version - "Battle Tower" (Replacement) by Latios212

Started by Zeta, June 28, 2021, 07:07:00 PM

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Submission Information:

Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Ruby Version & Pokémon Sapphire Version
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Battle Tower
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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mastersuperfan

- You could move the senza pedale in m1 right a tiny bit.
- In m1 RH beat 4, I hear sixths more prominently than fourths—maybe rewrite them as sixths?
- I hear the LH strike again on m1 beat 4.
- You could invert m7/9 LH beat 3.5 up like the original does.
- Hearing something along these lines for the arpeggio in the second half of m13—there are definitely still some Bb's in there:
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- Maybe write the eighth note + eighth rests in m14-end LH as quarter notes, since there's pedal?
- You might write m18-20 LH beat 1 differently since the bass motion there is downward, unlike m14-17.
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

Latios212

All good suggestions, thanks! Not 100% sure how I wanted to edit 18-20 but it resembles the bass contour a little better now, with some fourths/fifths to flesh out the sound a bit.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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mastersuperfan

Looks good, I'll approve this now. Although one minor thing, I'm not sure about the utility of having staccatos in the RH m10-13 when there's also pedal.
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

Latios212

Quote from: mastersuperfan on July 27, 2021, 06:24:37 PMLooks good, I'll approve this now. Although one minor thing, I'm not sure about the utility of having staccatos in the RH m10-13 when there's also pedal.
Thanks! Sometimes I'll write those in anyway to show how the melody is intended to be articulated even if it doesn't make a noticeable difference with pedal. Sometimes, including for this piece in particular, it's simple to lift the pedal momentarily for the staccato'd note.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Static

In m13, the cross-staff 16ths look a little lopsided, like the LH stem is a bit too short compared to the others.
...And that's about it, very clean sheet. I think the accompaniment in m18-20 works well.

Latios212

Ah yeah that probably happened after I edited the pitches per MSF's comment. I've made a couple of tweaks, thanks!
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