Submission Information:
Series: Undertale
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Mysterious Shrine
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4780)
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I guess these are Switch exclusive tracks or something?
-All those three beat left hand chords should be written as dotted minims/halves.
-I'd recommend standardising the top, right and bottom margins all to 0.5.
-Any reason the final RH note is a quaver? I'd at least write it as a minim.
Aside from Libera's comments above (which I agree with), one thing to consider - I'd recommend a courtesy natural on the F in m. 6 RH. The harmony's Fb here so that could be misinterpreted.
Quote from: Libera on April 20, 2021, 12:03:37 PM-All those three beat left hand chords should be written as dotted minims/halves.
Less busy yes
Quote from: Libera on April 20, 2021, 12:03:37 PM-I'd recommend standardising the top, right and bottom margins all to 0.5.
I forgot about this one, curse the old template
Quote from: Libera on April 20, 2021, 12:03:37 PM-Any reason the final RH note is a quaver? I'd at least write it as a minim.
Not particularly. Changed to staccato quarter
Quote from: Latios212 on April 20, 2021, 04:15:14 PMI'd recommend a courtesy natural on the F in m. 6 RH. The harmony's Fb here so that could be misinterpreted.
Good idea, courteoused
Margins - the left margin should be a bit bigger or the staff should have a left margin so the staff braces aren't poking out of the 0.5" space on the left.
anyway that's not going to stop me from approving this one, looks good otherwise
Quote from: Latios212 on April 20, 2021, 04:53:42 PMMargins - the left margin should be a bit bigger or the staff should have a left margin so the staff braces aren't poking out of the 0.5" space on the left.
Finale whyyy
Looks good to me.
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).
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