[PC] Undertale - "Mysterious Shrine" by Th3Gavst3r

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Undertale
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Mysterious Shrine
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r

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[Th3Gavst3r]

[Libera]

I guess these are Switch exclusive tracks or something?

-All those three beat left hand chords should be written as dotted minims/halves.
-I'd recommend standardising the top, right and bottom margins all to 0.5.
-Any reason the final RH note is a quaver?  I'd at least write it as a minim.

[Latios212]

Aside from Libera's comments above (which I agree with), one thing to consider - I'd recommend a courtesy natural on the F in m. 6 RH. The harmony's Fb here so that could be misinterpreted.

[Th3Gavst3r]

-All those three beat left hand chords should be written as dotted minims/halves.

Less busy yes

-I'd recommend standardising the top, right and bottom margins all to 0.5.

I forgot about this one, curse the old template

-Any reason the final RH note is a quaver?  I'd at least write it as a minim.

Not particularly. Changed to staccato quarter

I'd recommend a courtesy natural on the F in m. 6 RH. The harmony's Fb here so that could be misinterpreted.

Good idea, courteoused

[Latios212]

Margins - the left margin should be a bit bigger or the staff should have a left margin so the staff braces aren't poking out of the 0.5" space on the left.

anyway that's not going to stop me from approving this one, looks good otherwise

[Th3Gavst3r]

Margins - the left margin should be a bit bigger or the staff should have a left margin so the staff braces aren't poking out of the 0.5" space on the left.

Finale whyyy

[Libera]

Looks good to me.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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