Submission Information:
Series: Fire Emblem
Game: Fire Emblem Echoes: Shadows of Valentia
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Title Loop
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291)
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Opening
Quote from: Libera on June 05, 2021, 04:02:28 PMAnimation.
If you have a better source than this for the opening music box section, feel free to post it.
Is this right? "Title Loop" is listed on the OST (https://www.fireemblemwiki.org/wiki/Fire_Emblem_Echoes:_Shadows_of_Valentia_Original_Soundtrack), and this video definitely seems like the OST version.
Quote from: Latios212 on June 06, 2021, 03:25:53 PMIs this right? "Title Loop" is listed on the OST (https://www.fireemblemwiki.org/wiki/Fire_Emblem_Echoes:_Shadows_of_Valentia_Original_Soundtrack), and this video definitely seems like the OST version.
Looks right to me! This was uploaded since I last checked for one which is why I didn't know about it. I probably should have checked again myself... Thanks!
Cool! I actually have almost nothing to say since this looks great, just a few minor spacing things.
- Would suggest reducing space between LH/RH staves in the first couple systems a bit and use that space to put more room around the first couple systems as the 8va in the second system in particular could use more space above it
- The music's a little close to the header on pages 2/3, would suggest moving the music down a little and reducing space between systems slightly to account for it
- Maybe make the tremolo lines at the end equidistant from the notes (they're a bit closer to the left notes)
Approving regardless :P
Wow it's called title loop and yet it doesn't actually loop- m11: I hear a D in this chord (Em7).
- m37-38: I hear a C instead of B (D7 for both measures).
- m62 adds a B that isn't originally in the chord in m60, I guess it's up to you if you want to add it.
I think I've addressed everything. Thanks for checking.
Quote from: Static on June 22, 2021, 10:29:11 PMm37-38: I hear a C instead of B (D7 for both measures).
I can hear the B pretty clearly in 37, though it may move up to a C in bar 38. I can also hear the C in 37 but it's a lot quieter and also would be pretty awkward to voice that Bm7b9 chord so I think I'll just leave that one out. What I have now should be somewhat of a compromise, which is hopefully fine.
Quote from: Libera on June 24, 2021, 03:53:01 PMI can hear the B pretty clearly in 37, though it may move up to a C in bar 38. I can also hear the C in 37 but it's a lot quieter and also would be pretty awkward to voice that Bm7b9 chord so I think I'll just leave that one out. What I have now should be somewhat of a compromise, which is hopefully fine.
Sounds good, listening again I'm hearing that B as well as the C.
You have the wrong PDF uploaded though. Once you get that I can accept
Fixed, whoops.
accept
This submission has been accepted by Static (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4960).
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