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So ive created sheets for Ballad of the Goddess from Legend of Zelda Skyward Sword. Here it is:
So ive modified this post so now it contains all of my posts so you guys dont have to sort through this whole entire thread to find what you looking for.

[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "Ballad of the Goddess" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?k2117nc8mgcgxh3) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?z7eg3annaj5shfe)
 
[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "Ballad of the Goddess Duet" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?cs7vm2n76rsv7gp) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?xiyd202hu0lg189)

[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "Crimson Loftwing" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?l089clc2qp3ccnm) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?nn7bx9k3f52vnv1)

[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time - "Gerudo Valley" - REPLACEMENT - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?443txg350nd370k) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?m28zaetmvpub982)

[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "Knights Academy" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?c5ob6zo4lj3g01n) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?4i7hqwafvh4wc2p)

[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time - "Volviga Battle" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?m4xmep7udzbe4p4) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?34re6tptdbi0dhx)

[XBOX+PS3+PC] Portal 2 - "Reconstructing Science (Trailer Theme)" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?bgwrs6j9lvt4daj) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?gamfn0bka107itv)

[Wii] Super Mario Galaxy - "Buoy Base Galaxy" - REPLACEMENT - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?a8mda5ybz5ooeaa) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?e99790o2zwl472y)

[Wii] Super Mario Galaxy - "Freezeflame Galaxy (Ice Area)" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?poupo9o9x3nxm7a) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?z15ayeye5oze8hr)

[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "Farore's Silent Realm" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?u7yc9pkwtus8rub) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?x33z8ttaxi7vvaz)

[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "The Groosenator" -  Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?lq3492wg857ldoy) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?4rw8yn13pw2p3rq)

[GCN] Super Mario Sunshine - "Final Battle" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?7bg9xpd440uos99) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?knv35k8tngyp6o7)

[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "Lanayru Sand Sea" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?4gwfxwt5bx9pajl) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?ogldp11zu150ppq)

[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask - "Great Bay Temple" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?vdtckuutb2q4aqx) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?zxbls2amznvc9mb)

Sorry Guys, i made a key mistake in the mus (composers name!!) but ive fixed it.. here is the finished mus link  (http://mus[/url)

Click 'modify' on your first post, and change it yourself.

This is an excellent transcription, showing you have a good ear. However, you need to rework this into an arrangement with playability and clarity in mind, as there many places in which the layers overlapped with eachother very messily on the sheet and also many places in which the right hand was asked to play an interval of a 15th (2 octaves), which is simply impossible.

Don't get me wrong, you captured the song very well and sounds great, but the sheet needs some serious revision. Glad to welcome you into the NSM family!

EDIT: As a suggestion, you should use Dropbox instead of Mediafire. It's way better. (1.) You don't need to post links to revised scores, because dropbox automatically updates the file link, and; (2.) you get access to direct linking.

Quote from: Bespinben on November 29, 2011, 07:54:46 PMThis is an excellent transcription, showing you have a good ear. However, you need to rework this into an arrangement...

We've had a talk about this somewhere, haven't we? :P

Quote from: fingerz on November 29, 2011, 08:59:50 PMWe've had a talk about this somewhere, haven't we? :P

Are you referring to my arrangement of "Tiny Woods"? I thought I fixed that already... (got rid of the strenuous octave jumping in the left hand)

I don't want to spam up the "fixing the sheets thread", so I'll post my comments about your gerudo valley here.

-The title of this piece is "Gerudo Valley", not "Gerudo Fortress"(as seen in the official soundtrack)
-The 1st measure does not sound right-Too many wrong notes
-I think someone already mentioned that your missing the url, tempo marking, a ["], and "composition" is misspelled.
-Measures 8-11 dont need 8va
-The rhythm at 8 (and throught the piece) is written incorrectly:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg805.imageshack.us%2Fimg805%2F6429%2F49860720.png&hash=335fcee7c4551fdf314dccd588375753cc068082) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/805/49860720.png/)
-the 32nd note "trill" thing that starts at 12 is unnecessary-Remove it.
-The rhythm that starts at measure 16 is written incorrectly, look:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg846.imageshack.us%2Fimg846%2F4656%2F55551987.png&hash=27cd551a206cd1356a65fc054e3ffce726b10249) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/846/55551987.png/)
See how your able to see all four beats of the measure this way? much easier to read. Anywhere you have this rhythm you must apply this.
-At times You have multiple 8va's that collide-Fix it.
-Measures 16-23 don't even need an 8va.
-Measures 12, 22, and 23 are wrong-
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg577.imageshack.us%2Fimg577%2F7451%2F80891947.png&hash=f0aa959322ea1217b99a94251f744c3ae8ee1627) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/577/80891947.png/)
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg525.imageshack.us%2Fimg525%2F5185%2F86886169.png&hash=7a21ed8e8059288aa3babfb635186027a2f95454) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/525/86886169.png/)
Compare.
-The whole piece has two double bars in it, and both are in useless places
-Measures 24-29, and 32-43 have incorrect rhythm notation, see my 7th comment.
-I'm not totally sure about your choice of octaves throught the piece. I'd give that a good look through if I were you.
-I'd try to incorporate the bass line into the left hand, say have it play on beats 1 and 3, or 2 and 4. (if possible all 4 beats). Its quite a driving force to have a syncopated rhthm fight a simple bass line like this.

Any other problems...  ::)

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on November 30, 2011, 03:07:11 PMAny other problems...  ::)

Hahaha! Don't worry, this is all for your own good, and to get you into good habits. :P

Quote from: Bespinben on November 29, 2011, 07:54:46 PMwhich is simply impossible.

Do you think 9-16 is impossible?

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on November 30, 2011, 04:18:23 PMDo you think 9-16 is impossible?

the largest interval you should have in a piano piece is about a 10th.

Most of the time. Not in the middle of a 16th run..

Ive simplefyed my Ballad of the Goddess sheets, I belive the largest chord is a 14th, so im hoping it'll be alot better this time...
 Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?nbpbke2at038263) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?iyl0c4jl8s329oi). Also, since i just couldn't let go of the epicness of the immpossible original i made it into a duet.Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?624ugh813p3212x) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?y7291cizxm5lva7). I hope this time they fit the discription of an arrangement instead of a trascription this time. ;)

Quote from: Shadoninja on November 30, 2011, 04:25:38 PMthe largest interval you should have in a piano piece is about a 10th.

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on November 30, 2011, 07:24:42 PMthe largest chord is a 14th

:|

Ive made sheets for 'Reconstructing Science' the trailer theme for Portal 2. I hope there are minimal problems with these sheets unlike the rest so far... mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?wh631o1v8s18131) midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?gl8yz5g1n5b1xn1). (The Cake was a lie  8)...)

Look at your first post, see how I edited it so that you don't see the links? Modify that first post to add new sheets, and use that same format. It makes it easier on all of us when trying to find your music.

[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time - "Gerudo Valley" - GoronsOrchestrated Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?90bstj3com4pclf) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?dt1df17lor0j7wd)

See what I did there? ^^

Quote from: Winter on November 30, 2011, 07:52:12 PMSee what I did there? ^^

not that i know how but.........................

Put all of your sheets in the first post in that format, then people can find them all immediately!

Otherwise when the thread gets longer, the person would have to scroll through pages and pages to find a sheet.

I don't mean to be rude in anyway, just trying to help :)

Quote from: Winter on November 30, 2011, 07:55:31 PMPut all of your sheets in the first post in that format,

how do i do it tho?

Click 'modify' and put them there.

Quote from: Winter on November 30, 2011, 08:14:49 PMClick 'modify' and put them there.

I think Goron was actually asking about how one puts a url inside a piece of text, like [THIS] (http://google.com)

what he did before was put the link inside the [url] tags. instead, just write "Mus"

Or modify the first post and just look and see how I did it. Follow along.

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on November 30, 2011, 07:48:54 PM[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time - "Gerudo Valley" - GoronsOrchestrated Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?90bstj3com4pclf) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?dt1df17lor0j7wd)

...Would you mind if I just completly revised your sheet with correct rhythmic notation? 'Cus there's still alot of problems....
Atleast that way you could compare the two....

Quote from: Olimar12345 on November 30, 2011, 09:24:56 PM...Would you mind if I just completly revised your sheet with correct rhythmic notation? 'Cus there's still alot of problems....
Atleast that way you could compare the two....

I don't see any problems, but if you do then i guess a comparrason wouldn't hurt... also if you could specify the prolems that would be great, cause i dont see any mistaks.......

Quote from: Winter on November 30, 2011, 08:19:08 PMwhat he did before was put the link inside the [url] tags. instead, just write "Mus

i assume it will keep the link then?

Quote from: Olimar12345 on November 30, 2011, 09:05:30 AMI don't want to spam up the "fixing the sheets thread", so I'll post my comments about your gerudo valley here.

-The title of this piece is "Gerudo Valley", not "Gerudo Fortress"(as seen in the official soundtrack)
-The 1st measure does not sound right-Too many wrong notes
-I think someone already mentioned that your missing the url, tempo marking, a ["], and "composition" is misspelled.
-Measures 8-11 dont need 8va
-The rhythm at 8 (and throught the piece) is written incorrectly:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg805.imageshack.us%2Fimg805%2F6429%2F49860720.png&hash=335fcee7c4551fdf314dccd588375753cc068082) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/805/49860720.png/)
-the 32nd note "trill" thing that starts at 12 is unnecessary-Remove it.
-The rhythm that starts at measure 16 is written incorrectly, look:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg846.imageshack.us%2Fimg846%2F4656%2F55551987.png&hash=27cd551a206cd1356a65fc054e3ffce726b10249) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/846/55551987.png/)
See how your able to see all four beats of the measure this way? much easier to read. Anywhere you have this rhythm you must apply this.
-At times You have multiple 8va's that collide-Fix it.
-Measures 16-23 don't even need an 8va.
-Measures 12, 22, and 23 are wrong-
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg577.imageshack.us%2Fimg577%2F7451%2F80891947.png&hash=f0aa959322ea1217b99a94251f744c3ae8ee1627) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/577/80891947.png/)
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg525.imageshack.us%2Fimg525%2F5185%2F86886169.png&hash=7a21ed8e8059288aa3babfb635186027a2f95454) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/525/86886169.png/)
Compare.
-The whole piece has two double bars in it, and both are in useless places
-Measures 24-29, and 32-43 have incorrect rhythm notation, see my 7th comment.
-I'm not totally sure about your choice of octaves throught the piece. I'd give that a good look through if I were you.
-I'd try to incorporate the bass line into the left hand, say have it play on beats 1 and 3, or 2 and 4. (if possible all 4 beats). Its quite a driving force to have a syncopated rhthm fight a simple bass line like this.

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 01, 2011, 07:59:54 AMI don't see any problems, but if you do then i guess a comparrason wouldn't hurt... also if you could specify the prolems that would be great, cause i dont see any mistaks.......

Look at the pics above.

Goddamnit every time i click quote on someones post, I somehow miss and click modify. So I have to go back and fix them ._.

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 01, 2011, 08:05:14 AMi assume it will keep the link then?

Ya

Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 01, 2011, 12:21:08 PMLook at the pics above.

I fixed all of that though! I addressed all ligitimate problems. Are you sure you clicked the correct link?

Quote from: Winter on November 30, 2011, 08:19:08 PMwhat he did before was put the link inside the [url] tags. instead, just write "Mus"

I tryed that but not theres no link there... im guessing i did it incorrectly? All i did was put mus inside the url tags, but the link dissapeared compleatly...   :'(

{url=mediafire link here}Text goes here{/url}

Do that, but replace all of these brackets {} with these []

Quote from: Winter on December 01, 2011, 02:50:59 PM{url=mediafire link here}Text goes here{/url}

Do that, but replace all of these brackets {} with these []

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Now it makes alot more sence! thx  ;D     

Use the quote tool to copy  THIS (http://marioandluigi.wikidot.com/local--files/forum:thread/MusicalHallDuet.zip) and use it as a guide. :D

Winter wanted him to figure it out by using the "Modify" tool to see how he did it in his first post!

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on November 30, 2011, 07:48:54 PM[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time - "Gerudo Valley" - GoronsOrchestrated Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?90bstj3com4pclf) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?dt1df17lor0j7wd)

This version is currently riddled with mistakes. In fact, only the formatting errors appear to be fixed. Look at my pics!

[url=http://www.mediafire.com/?90bstj3com4pclf]Mus[/url]
That will appear as this: Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?90bstj3com4pclf)

Does that help?

Checked your Ballad of the Goddess, and it's a nice arrangement. A few minor mistakes, but it really shows that you got potential.
But it's also unplayable, even more than Dahans' songs :>

Quote from: Bespinben on November 29, 2011, 07:54:46 PMEDIT: As a suggestion, you should use Dropbox instead of Mediafire. It's way better. (1.) You don't need to post links to revised scores, because dropbox automatically updates the file link, and; (2.) you get access to direct linking.

Mediafire do have directlinking without paying. They just don't want you to know :X
Open your uploaded file and go to where you can download it.
Instead of leftclicking on the download link, rightclick and copy the address ::)

Quote from: fabbemannen on December 02, 2011, 12:59:26 PMMediafire do have directlinking without paying. They just don't want you to know :X
Open your uploaded file and go to where you can download it.
Instead of leftclicking on the download link, rightclick and copy the address ::)

that's not really direct linking because it takes you to the page where you can download the file. with dropbox you get it directly without having to go to any page, kind of like downloading a file on the site. besides, there's still the whole not having to re-upload the file like in mediafire. with dropbox you just have to have it saved into the dropbox folder and when someone downloads it, it will be the most current version.

Quote from: Shadoninja on December 02, 2011, 01:21:32 PMthat's not really direct linking because it takes you to the page where you can download the file. with dropbox you get it directly without having to go to any page, kind of like downloading a file on the site. besides, there's still the whole not having to re-upload the file like in mediafire. with dropbox you just have to have it saved into the dropbox folder and when someone downloads it, it will be the most current version.

let me demonstrate:
Normal link
http://www.mediafire.com/?veez2e5e1ed4nb6
Direct link (saving the downloadlink from the link above)
http://199.91.152.143/6paq3z9yp2jg/veez2e5e1ed4nb6/The+Goddess+Song+-+Harp+Version.rar

That said, I do use dropbox too. But mostly since I use two computers and it gets easier with savefiles and such

Quote from: fabbemannen on December 02, 2011, 01:29:56 PMlet me demonstrate:
Normal link
http://www.mediafire.com/?veez2e5e1ed4nb6
Direct link (saving the downloadlink from the link above)
http://199.91.152.143/6paq3z9yp2jg/veez2e5e1ed4nb6/The+Goddess+Song+-+Harp+Version.rar

That said, I do use dropbox too. But mostly since I use two computers and it gets easier with savefiles and such

both of those take me to the same page. I think it only works for the user and not anyone else.

Quote from: Shadoninja on December 02, 2011, 01:39:55 PMboth of those take me to the same page. I think it only works for the user and not anyone else.

He's right.

Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 01, 2011, 08:44:28 PMThis version is currently riddled with mistakes. In fact, only the formatting errors appear to be fixed. Look at my pics!

Show me them. Prove all of these 'mistakes' you speak of. The problems i addressed where ligitamate problems. Iligitament promlems did not exist. The only problems i fixed where the ones that existed. I would very much like to see your envisionment of perfection. You said you would make a conparison. Where is it. If my sheets have mistakes, i want the mistakes proved. 

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 02, 2011, 04:58:27 PMShow me them. Prove all of these 'mistakes' you speak of. The problems i addressed where ligitamate problems. Iligitament promlems did not exist. The only problems i fixed where the ones that existed. I would very much like to see your envisionment of perfection. You said you would make a conparison. Where is it. If my sheets have mistakes, i want the mistakes proved. 

*sigh* here. (http://www.mediafire.com/?kp4940nfgra842u)  Look closely, at every single measure. ALL OF THEM. You look at it and look at it untill you can't look at it any more, then look at it again. There were FAR more problems with it than I had originally found. 28 and 29 were flat out not the right melody, the intro was still wrong, tied notes and dotted notes were used incorrectly, the list goes on. Next time I say there's something wrong, chances are SOMETHING'S FUCKING WRONG.

*exhales* Glad that's over with! now let me take a look at your Ballad of the Goddess... (Still playing skyward sword, it's so  awesome!)

First Off Im new here! What do you expect?  Second Off What is up with the left hand? The counting is off and where does that low note come in? Third Off I see no major changes in the melody. Just minor notation changes.



Fourth Off How come your the only one who noticed these problems!?
       
                 Hmm? 8)

First off: Something more outstanding then most new ones, since I know you can.
Second off: The low note gives some more rhythm in the song and some more bass to fill up the song.
Third off: Major notation changes. The changed version is much more easier to read
Fourth off: ...meh

Don't worry, Goron, it's nothing personal. While Olimar might come across as a little blunt at times, he's really good at what he's doing. If he spots a mistake, he'll point it out. And if his advice are followed, or at least taken to the point of discussion, sheets tend to turn out a lot better. Regard it as a harsh quality filter, but a necessary one. First of all, it's best to have the song top notch before submission (saves the mods some time, and your sheet is a lot less likely to be rejected, so that's less work on your part too). Second, it keeps mistakes off the main site. Third, feedback helps you improve as well. And your thread is more noticed when it has a few more pages, meaning even more feedback in the future, again probably leading to more learning and interest on your part.

The newcomer period might be a little rough, but once you're through it, and learn the tricks of the trade, it's sunshine and rainbows from then on. I hope you polish those sheets properly, the site as well as your reputation and skill will improve on it! Looking forward to see more of your stuff in the future!

First AND Last off, there is another arrangement of this that is being uploaded to the site. It's been in our queue for a long time. Sorry.

Quote from: Winter on December 03, 2011, 03:52:22 PMFirst AND Last off, there is another arrangement of this that is being uploaded to the site. It's been in our queue for a long time. Sorry.

Gerudo Valley? Check where I originally posted it. It was ment as a replacment.

Yes well, we already have a very well arranged replacement that has been ready to upload for a long time. Sorry to disappoint. It would take a bit to get yours up to the same quality.

err, dont mean to be rude, but in case you havent noticed, i posted some reconstructing science sheets, at the bottem of page 1...they where kinda ignored cause everyone was so busy with my gerudo valley sheets... if someone could take a look at them, that would be great, (ive noticed that pointing out mistakes goes without saying...)

Quote from: Winter on December 03, 2011, 09:36:44 PMYes well, we already have a very well arranged replacement that has been ready to upload for a long time. Sorry to disappoint. It would take a bit to get yours up to the same quality.

would you mind if i where to take a look at them? im curious to see what im up against      :)



(off topic, but who likes this new avatar better?)

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 04, 2011, 01:55:21 PMwould you mind if i where to take a look at them? im curious to see what im up against      :)

I too am interested-Who's it by, Winter?

I wonder if It's still in my folder, hold on

Erm. Gerudo Valley. (http://www.mediafire.com/?3izj8o3xc2z8a2y)

I like the octave choices that are in GoronOrchestrates's new one better-Give it a looksies.

Quote from: Winter on December 04, 2011, 07:17:05 PMErm. Gerudo Valley. (http://www.mediafire.com/?3izj8o3xc2z8a2y)

I cant open it. Whenever i try it says incompatible version! This has happened a few times before as well! Help! :'(

It's on Finale 2011. Use finale reader.

Ive written some more sheets for the boss battle with 'VOLVIGA - SUBTERRAINIAN LAVA DRAGON' ,so if someone could take a looksie (and point out any problems  ::)) that would be great!

[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?9p8mziorz1838wz) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?3tkua0ayurb875v) <-- (GOT IT!! ;D 8))

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 05, 2011, 08:08:02 PM[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time Mus]http://www.mediafire.com/?9p8mziorz1838wz]Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?9p8mziorz1838wz) Midi]http://www.mediafire.com/?3tkua0ayurb875v]Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?3tkua0ayurb875v) <-- (Still not working!  :'()

here
[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?9p8mziorz1838wz) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?3tkua0ayurb875v)
and here's the code
[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time [url=http://www.mediafire.com/?9p8mziorz1838wz]Mus[/url] [url=http://www.mediafire.com/?3tkua0ayurb875v]Midi[/url]
here's what you did.
[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time [url=http://www.mediafire.com/?9p8mziorz1838wz]Mus>>>]http://www.mediafire.com/?9p8mziorz1838wz]Mus<<<[/url]
[url=http://www.mediafire.com/?3tkua0ayurb875v]Midi>>>]http://www.mediafire.com/?3tkua0ayurb875v]Midi<<<[/url] <-- (Still not working!  :'()everything inside the ">>> <<<'s" are where you made an error.

It's simple. First use
[url=http://mediafire.com/skdjghskdf]
Next, write the text you want to appear followed by [/url]

Mus[/url]
It will look like this before you post it

[url=http://mediafire.com/skdjghskdf]Mus[/url]
And this afterwards:

Mus (http://mediafire.com/skdjghskdf)

Remember those steps, I'll show you again with the {} brackets.

{url=LINK GOES HERE}THE TEXT YOU WANT US TO SEE GOES HERE{/url}

And all the coding is orange.

Of course, I probably made it look hard, Damn.

OMG IVE FINALLY FIGURED IT OUT!!! Thanks for all the help in finally figuring it out guys! Ends up, the url had put itself twice! Any future sheet posts from me should be alot better now!  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D :D ;) :) ;) :D ;D ;D ;D

Geez, its been pretty quite around here! And no one seems to be noticing my Reconstructing Science Sheets (Just made it bold so someone skimming through the thread would notice...) :D

I wouldn't say it's been too quiet, considering you've already amassed 5 pages in your thread in only 9 days. That's like an NSM record.

Quote from: Bespinben on December 08, 2011, 05:01:44 PMI wouldn't say it's been too quiet, considering you've already amassed 5 pages in your thread in only 9 days. That's like an NSM record.

Really!? An NSM record!?! Wow!! ;D ;D 64 Replies and counting! :D

ive got even more sheets now, this time its the theme for links crimson loftwing in skyward sword.
[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword: Crimson Loftwing mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?m4qisx4msnlv48d) midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?o3pd7wkvvamwx56). <--- YESS! Ive gotten it working!! (Then, its my 50^th post, so i'd better...).

Hello again, people who don't seem to care (::))! Im back, with more Skyward Sword sheets!!
This time, a piece very close to the beginning of the game! The Knight's Acadamy!
           
                                              [Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword: Knight's Acadamy
                                                                             Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?9oyf8h51zxms1o3)     Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?d2dc6wwabk5z2dd)

If someone could find the time to take a looksie this time (Yes, Bespinben, 5 pages in 9 days, after that it got quiet.) that would be great!
               Cya!

A few things:

1.) Great job on the Crimson Loftwing arrangement. It's very solid.
2.) Same compliment extends to the Knight's Academy arrangement. However, it seems that you forgot to write in a key signature. I'm not the best when it comes to identifying them, but it seems like the piece modulates between E flat major (3 flats) and A flat major (4 flats).
3.) Did you see my response to you on the Rachimanoff help page?

Quote from: Bespinben on December 10, 2011, 08:49:16 PM3.) Did you see my response to you on the Rachimanoff help page?

::) I was only joking!

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 10, 2011, 09:26:44 PM::) I was only joking!

*phew* Good to know!

...and I really suggest adding the key signature of 3 flats to Knight Academy  ;)

Does no one but Bespinben care about my sheets anymore?  :'(

I must say, you're improving fast! A couple of things: I think that Crimson Loftwing is better off without pedal, but if you really think it's necessary, then just cut it down a little. And for Knight Academy, I would double-check measures 18 and 19 (the bass seems to be the wrong chord), put the melody an octave higher, and cut off the last 6 measures.

Sounds Good!

Is this (http://www.mediafire.com/?0yin0irodkqxo0h) better?

Wait a minute! Why is everyone ignoring my Reconstructing Science Sheets!?! I didnt post them up here for nothing!!

(By the way, does anyone know where i can find the oracle of ages/seasons soundtrack? im interested in arranging some songs from there.)

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 12, 2011, 08:51:15 PMWait a minute! Why is everyone ignoring my Reconstructing Science Sheets!?! I didnt post them up here for nothing!!

(By the way, does anyone know where i can find the oracle of ages/seasons soundtrack? im interested in arranging some songs from there.)

Talk about a triple post  ::)  (don't worry though, it's fine)

You can probably just look up individual songs from LoZ: Oracle of Ages/Seasons on Youtube. That's what I did for most of my PMD arrangements until I got ahold of a ripped soundtrack not too long ago.

I don't know about others looking at your thread, but I haven't played Portal, so that's why I haven't looked at your arrangement from it.

Sorry bout' the triple post, but no one was noticing them until now! And its a trailer theme so im sure its somewhere on youtube. I'll look for a link.

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 12, 2011, 08:29:48 PMIs this (http://www.mediafire.com/?0yin0irodkqxo0h) better?

I can't tell. My computer can't read .rar files.

Quote from: Dudeman on December 13, 2011, 09:12:47 AMI can't tell. My computer can't read .rar files.

And you cant download WinRar? :(

Quote from: Bespinben on December 12, 2011, 09:44:00 PMI don't know about others looking at your thread, but I haven't played Portal, so that's why I haven't looked at your arrangement from it.

This. Lo siento.

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 13, 2011, 04:21:50 PMAnd you cant download WinRar? :(

Go for 7zip. I love it.

Quote from: Winter on December 03, 2011, 09:36:44 PMYes well, we already have a very well arranged replacement that has been ready to upload for a long time. Sorry to disappoint. It would take a bit to get yours up to the same quality.

Are you sure?

Yes, it's a very professional replacement. I'm not trying to say yours is bad. I'm quite confident of Deku's.

Deku!?! The one I saw had nothing to do with Deku! Must've been the wrong one...

Quote from: Winter on December 04, 2011, 07:17:05 PMI wonder if It's still in my folder, hold on

Erm. Gerudo Valley. (http://www.mediafire.com/?3izj8o3xc2z8a2y)

It was worked on by both Sekter and Deku.

            *Wave of Comprehension*  :o

Ah. It only said Sekter on the sheets so i assumed it was just Sekter.
EDIT: And the rest? Are they of your liking?

I haven't looked at any of your sheets. My job is to look at them when they come through the main submissions thread.

Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 04, 2011, 08:09:12 PMI like the octave choices that are in GoronOrchestrates's new one better-Give it a looksies.

When me and Deku update next, we'll compare them.

K.

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 13, 2011, 09:15:15 PMAnd the rest? Are they of your liking?

Well?

If you're asking Winter, he said he'll check it over during the submission process.

If you're asking the rest of us, would you mind putting all of the most updated versions of your sheets on the first post so we can all find them easier? It's hard to tell which is the most updated of certain sheets when they're posted a lot throughout pages :P

I could do that. Sorry if its been hard to find them... FROM NOW ON, THIS THREAD WILL BE MORE COMPREHENDABLE! Is that better?

Wow I really like the Ballad of the Goddesses...  (assuming the one on the front page is the final version). I would really recommend cleaning up the layers though. On many parts layers aren't even necessary, and on others they need to be switched around.

A tip that pumpy_heart gave me is that the lowest voice in a clef should have the highest layer, because the beams don't interfere that way. If you want, though, you can also go through and pick out individual notes with the "selection tool" and hold "L" on your keyboard to switch their beam directions. It's just kind of confusing right now is all.

Shoot! :'( I think ive got Arranger's Block! Da Da Daa! (dont worry its not contagous ::))
 

Are you working on the Boss Battle Theme??? :D

???

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 19, 2011, 07:07:29 PMCOMPREHENDABLE!

Comprehensible.

http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4006.0

-_-

Yea, about that... Well, its gonna take awile.

and olimar? whats comprehensable? ???

U just misspelled it.

Uh, no, he didn't. He was saying that you would be able to comprehend the thread better.

^^ Yah but "comprehendable" isn't a word

Stop misspelling words!! I googled horrendes and after trying to go to a website it redirected me and gave me a virus. :<

ooooooooook

... dictionary.com

Quote from: Jub3r7 on December 21, 2011, 07:04:11 PMStop misspelling words!! I googled horrendes and after trying to go to a website it redirected me and gave me a virus. :<

And taht, my freinds, is preasiesley why yuo ues a gode olf fasison dictonnarry! (Note that I mis-spelt as many words possible, AND, that its not my fault cause these posting diolgue boxes DON'T HAVE SPELL CHECK!)

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 21, 2011, 07:30:47 PMthat its not my fault cause these posting diolgue boxes DON'T HAVE SPELL CHECK!)

what browser are you using?
I know that firefox has an option to check spelling as you type but i'm not sure if any others have that or some kind of add-on that allows that.

Quote from: Shadoninja on December 21, 2011, 08:33:50 PMwhat browser are you using?
I know that firefox has an option to check spelling as you type but i'm not sure if any others have that or some kind of add-on that allows that.

Windows Internet Explorer.

Quote from: Bespinben on December 21, 2011, 08:45:54 PMThe main difference between Dr. P's arrangement of "Knight Academy" and GoronOrchestrated's arrangement is key signature: Dr.P's has one, and Goron's doesn't. Aside from that, I actually like Goron's arrangement slightly better because his usage of mordent is more accurate to the original than Dr. P's.

Regarding the key signature, and pretending we love double sharps, how is this (http://www.mediafire.com/?nuce3mmop6fk5oz)?

btw, what is mordent?

a melodic embellishment consisting of a rapid alternation of a principal tone with the tone a half or a whole step below it, called single  or short  when the auxiliary tone occurs once and double  or long  when this occurs twice or more.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh!
I get it now! Right out of the pages of a dictionary of some sort?

If dictionary.com has pages then yes

This is a mordent:
(the top line is the note with the mordent, the bottom is how it would be played)

(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1111.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fh475%2FBespinben%2Finvertmordentfj1.png&hash=c2867c72e810b1b92d51b41c9f7bf9880dbdca71)

Webpages

(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2F27.media.tumblr.com%2Ftumblr_lki7jjSYvG1qjcx34o1_500.png&hash=c59d5b2ade70d9149b75d2f3efa2986f40c4ecf8)

Quote from: Bespinben on December 21, 2011, 09:13:32 PMThis is a mordent:
(the top line is the note with the mordent, the bottom is how it would be played)

(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1111.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fh475%2FBespinben%2Finvertmordentfj1.png&hash=c2867c72e810b1b92d51b41c9f7bf9880dbdca71)

Ah, well then yes, I did use quite a few of those, and DrP used none.
And could you take a look at my volviga battle arrangement and DrP's volviga battle arrangement and decide which one of those is better?

Quote from: spitllama on December 21, 2011, 09:15:17 PM(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2F27.media.tumblr.com%2Ftumblr_lki7jjSYvG1qjcx34o1_500.png&hash=c59d5b2ade70d9149b75d2f3efa2986f40c4ecf8)

WHAT IS THAT?






It has a striking resemblence to Forever Alone... :P

Goron asked two questions, one being about the mordent, the other being about key signature of "Knight Academy" from Skyward Sword. I think we can agree that the question about mordent has been answered. Now about "Knight Academy", I'm pretty sure the key signature is not 7 sharps. As I said before, I am very confident that the key signature is 4 flats. No need for double sharps.

EDIT: I'm pretty sure that's the "Ah ha!" face.

Bro.. I am still searching through your pages to find your sheets >:(

Donde esta tu papel de batalla de Volvagia??

Quote from: spitllama on December 21, 2011, 09:19:50 PMBro.. I am still searching through your pages to find your sheets >:(

Donde esta tu papel de batalla de Volvagia??

4th page, 14th post from the top.

Best thing to do Goron would be to just edit the first post at the top of the first page anytime you add a new arrangement or make a revision to one you've already made, that way we don't have to surf through your thread.

Sure!

Quote from: spitllama on December 19, 2011, 01:49:22 PMIf you're asking Winter, he said he'll check it over during the submission process.

If you're asking the rest of us, would you mind putting all of the most updated versions of your sheets on the first post so we can all find them easier? It's hard to tell which is the most updated of certain sheets when they're posted a lot throughout pages :P

lol

Well im busy making them more comprehendable as we speak (or post).

There! Check the first post, and its all there (Exept for Reconstructing Science, but thats explained there.)!

Knight's Academy's MUS link directs to Crimson Loftwing.
I would recommend putting the files into a zip file and linking to that.

Oh No! Its gone horribly wrong, hasn't it. What other links are wrong, and I can probably revise the situation...

I'll list them all here:
- "Knight's Academy" MUS links to "Crimson Loftwing" midi.
- "Knight's Academy" midi links to "Gerudo Valley" MUS.
- "Volvagia Battle" MUS links to "Knight's Academy" MUS.
- "Volvagia Battle" midi links to "Gerudo Valley" midi.

Oh God no...  :(

^This is why I use Dropbox  :P

*Sigh*   

So is that all the problems then? I'll adress them tonight.

If only Ballad of the Goddess was in a pdf... Oh well. I'll just stick to reading Zelda's Lullaby backwards.

Yea.. I cant make PDFs, cause the software is rather expencive...
But it would be great if someone could volenteer... :)

There is that better?


btw, what are BAK files?

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 22, 2011, 07:54:56 PMThere is that better?


btw, what are BAK files?

finale backup files.

Whaa? ???

First time checking out your sheets. No offense, but I haven't played Skyward Sword yet and want that music to be heard first in it's correct environment.
So I checked out your rearrangement of Gerudo Valley. Pretty nice for a relatively new guy. Good job!

Here's a few things you can do to create a better sheet. I'm pretty sure measure 15 has the wrong notes in the treble. Should be A, B, A, G#. If I'm wrong, I'm going to hate myself forever, but that's how I'm 99% sure it goes.
Secondly, don't use two dotted notes next to each other in a simple meter (such as this one, 2/4, 3/4, 2/2, etc. (the opposite being compound meters such as 6/8, 9/8, 12/4 etc.)). It makes it unnecessary complicated for the player to play, even though the sound created is quite common. And after every dotted figure, the remaining pulse in that beat should be clearly seen. Measure 25 fails to do this, instead tying the dotted eighth to an eighth, hiding that sixteenth note.
Measure 25 is also incorrect because it doesn't show the traditionally strong beat in the measure (beat 1 and 3). It hides beat 3 by placing the half note a sixteenth note too early. You could tie a sixteenth note to a half note to fix this.
Measure 30 should use a B natural, not a Cb. Odd decision there. Problem with beat division in measure 32 where again the third beat isn't clear. Same in 33. Use E# in measure 35. Measure 40 is odd to read metrically. I would clearly show each beat in those measures. And use an A# in measure 42.
I mentioned the majority of these problems only the first time they occur. You should fix them if you see them anywhere else.

Sounds great. Keep up the good work! And if anyone has already said all this in the 10 pages you've quickly obtained, my apologies.

Fixed.

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 22, 2011, 07:34:46 PMYea.. I cant make PDFs, cause the software is rather expencive...
But it would be great if someone could volenteer... :)

I'd be willing to help...maybe...

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 22, 2011, 07:34:46 PMYea.. I cant make PDFs, cause the software is rather expencive...
But it would be great if someone could volenteer... :)

Try PDFcreator (http://sourceforge.net/projects/pdfcreator/), it's a free program. I've written a tutorial on how to print in pdf here (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=2223.msg102555#msg102555)

The rather expensive free software.

Quote from: Winter on December 23, 2011, 04:04:31 PMThe rather expensive free software.

Adobe Acrobat is around $150...  ::)

Quote from: Shadoninja on December 23, 2011, 10:20:00 AMPDFcreator (http://sourceforge.net/projects/pdfcreator/), it's a free program.

 ::) ::) ::) ::) ::)

I know... I saw it....

Uhg... its so creepy. I look at whos online, and one of the guests actions is 'Nothing, or nothing you can see...'

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on December 23, 2011, 07:52:33 PMUhg... its so creepy. I look at whos online, and one of the guests actions is 'Nothing, or nothing you can see...'

Ahrg! Theres a whole bunch now!
Like Moon Children!

well guests can view the registration page, while we cannot, as we have already registered. there's many other exceptions like when I view the staff board, it'll say that. It's just basically content you can't access.

I have a hunch that JaMaHa wrote that 'nothing you can see' text though. lol

Quote from: Winter on December 23, 2011, 11:02:15 PMwell guests can view the registration page, while we cannot, as we have already registered.

But wouldn't it saw Regestering or something like that?

if you meant to say 'say'.... i have no idea. Sure that would make sense, but I've never seen that in the list before.

Notice how in the 'Who's online' area, each user is viewing an area. each area they are viewing is a link. if there was a link to the registration page, it would not work for you, as you are logged in. making it....... 'nothing you can see'

Make sense?

Hey Gorons, loving the Ballad of the Goddess duet. It's nice not having to have 2 pianos. I'm literally printing it right now so as I work I'll post any concerns! Gracias!

Alright, so I took a look at Volvagia's theme. It's great except for the intro. There's a precise timing that happens. after the first two intro beats, the break before the next notes is much shorter. and the timing for where you have the 5 notes with the 3 under it... well it's actually two quarter notes, and then a triplet.

There are some other harmonies in those introductory chords too, not just octaves. Go ahead and fix that up. Otherwise, I really enjoyed that arrangement.

Quote from: Winter on January 07, 2012, 04:19:10 AMAlright, so I took a look at Volvagia's theme. It's great except for the intro. There's a precise timing that happens. after the first two intro beats, the break before the next notes is much shorter. and the timing for where you have the 5 notes with the 3 under it... well it's actually two quarter notes, and then a triplet.

There are some other harmonies in those introductory chords too, not just octaves. Go ahead and fix that up. Otherwise, I really enjoyed that arrangement.

You liked the epic glissandos tho, right?  ;)

If they landed on the right note... Then yeah ^.^

That's how I used to play it. Except they don't start on the same note either.

Hey Gorons, my brother and I were working through your duet and found a lot of overlap.

I fixed up the piece to have no overlaps between each others' hands and removed notes that were played the same by both hands of the same octave.

I edited it (http://www.mediafire.com/?1j9b206ftjp67yy) least as possible. You may want to look into it.

I wasnt the first to arrange Ballad of the Goddess, was I.
I've proof I'm not the last.
...

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on January 15, 2012, 10:09:36 AMI wasnt the first to arrange Ballad of the Goddess, was I.
I've proof I'm not the last.
...

you are the first, and then Manio (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4058.0) arranged it, and lastly Zachary Krodel (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4088.0) arranged it.

Okay that helps me a lot. Forgot to tell you guys, I'm going to put up A Ballad of the Goddess for the next update (Whether you like it or not ;D) It's what the community is looking for. So I'll be looking at this sheet after work today. Then I'll look at the other two. The best one, along with some editing will go up on the site. We need Skyward Sword music obviously. Make any last final changes, and I better not find it without dynamics, or Formatting problems.... Okay bye now.

Quote from: Winter on January 16, 2012, 07:11:44 AMMake any last final changes, and I better not find it without dynamics, or Formatting problems.... Okay bye now.

I feel so reassured...

Yay for Buoy Base (Or however the heck you spell buoy)! SMG For The Win!

Riddled with mistakes. Besides, mine don't need to be replaced.

Quote from: Winter on January 16, 2012, 07:11:44 AMOkay that helps me a lot. Forgot to tell you guys, I'm going to put up A Ballad of the Goddess for the next update (Whether you like it or not ;D) It's what the community is looking for. So I'll be looking at this sheet after work today. Then I'll look at the other two. The best one, along with some editing will go up on the site. We need Skyward Sword music obviously. Make any last final changes, and I better not find it without dynamics, or Formatting problems.... Okay bye now.

This sheet is definitely not going up in it's current state. Or any state similar to it.

@Winter: Mine?

@Olimar12345: Oh, Yours?

Quote from: Olimar12345 on January 17, 2012, 09:12:06 PMRiddled with mistakes.

But Good Lord, how did I not see that! I looked earlier today, then I look now, FWAPOW! Its there!

Yeah, I did the land and underwater versions.

Well I saw water...

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on January 17, 2012, 09:26:10 PMWell I saw water...

???

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on January 17, 2012, 09:23:47 PM@Winter: Mine?

Yes. Ballad of the Goddess.

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on November 29, 2011, 06:51:30 PM[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "Ballad of the Goddess Duet" - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?cs7vm2n76rsv7gp) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?xiyd202hu0lg189)

Things in 3/4 aren't written like that...

look:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg7.imageshack.us%2Fimg7%2F8642%2Fgfdsah.png&hash=b243e71bc346b49f99c5342f61578329baafb298) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/7/gfdsah.png/)
Green=good
Red=bad

EDIT: My bad, measure one in RH of pno. 2 can be written like that sometimes. You have to make it look like 3/4, not 6/8. They are NOT the same meter.

Yes, using a 6/8 metre would probably be best in that section. By the way, I think your arrangements are really good for a new-comer, and that even though the list of "wrong" things in your pieces made by other members may be long, they honestly have your musical progress at heart (and also they want quality sheets on the site, I definitely don't blame them for that)

I honestly couldn't see the Non-duet Ballad of the Goddess being easy for a newcomer.

Quote from: Meta-Ridley on January 17, 2012, 11:20:31 PMYes, using a 6/8 metre would probably be best in that section.

Its supposed to be in 3/4.

But he's written it as if it's in 6/8, so he either changes the music, or he changes the time signature.

Quote from: Olimar12345 on January 17, 2012, 09:32:04 PM???

I knew the water Buoy Base was there, but not the land one! Is it that hard to comprehend my speech?

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on January 18, 2012, 06:54:44 PMIs it that hard to comprehend my speech?

Yes.

Quote from: Olimar12345 on January 18, 2012, 07:01:26 PMYes.

Doust thou really thinketh so?

No, lol :P

Hmm, just looked over your Freezeflame Galaxy arrangement. Rather than just go and tell you whats wrong with it, I want to try an experiment. Print your sheet out in its current state and take it to a piano. Sit down and play the piece through(at any speed, just make sure you do everything that you wrote on the page)

You will learn alot by doing this, trust me. vvv
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg21.imageshack.us%2Fimg21%2F3372%2Fimg20120118220125.jpg&hash=07f656d763a03277091e695de09a6212faf2187c) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/21/img20120118220125.jpg/)
I do it so much, there's no closer I can put the two in my room!

Quote from: Olimar12345 on January 18, 2012, 08:05:46 PMHmm, just looked over your Freezeflame Galaxy arrangement. Rather than just go and tell you whats wrong with it, I want to try an experiment. Print your sheet out in its current state and take it to a piano. Sit down and play the piece through(at any speed, just make sure you do everything that you wrote on the page)

You will learn alot by doing this, trust me. vvv
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg21.imageshack.us%2Fimg21%2F3372%2Fimg20120118220125.jpg&hash=07f656d763a03277091e695de09a6212faf2187c) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/21/img20120118220125.jpg/)
I do it so much, there's no closer I can put the two in my room!

1. I've done this many times (without printing it out) and have nearly sucseeded many times
2. What wrong with it.
                                       

Hmmm... really? Don't find it a bit hard to read/play? I'll get back to you....

Quote from: Olimar12345 on January 18, 2012, 08:05:46 PMPrint your sheet out in its current state and take it to a piano. Sit down and play the piece through(at any speed, just make sure you do everything that you wrote on the page)

You will learn alot by doing this, trust me.

This is what I was suggesting you do for your Ballad of the Goddess duet Gorons.. (did you even see my post?)

Who's Yoshi17274?

What?

He/She's listed on the sheet as the arranger (Freezeflame Galaxy, that is)

Quote from: Olimar12345 on January 18, 2012, 09:09:54 PMWho's Yoshi17274?

Oops.
Thats what I used to call myself. I acctually registered on here as Yoshi17274 a long time ago to post the freezeflame sheets, but I was young and foolish and couldn't figure out how, thus I did not post anything. So the creation of Gorons Orchestrated was because I could not log on to Yoshi17274 (probably cause it was deleted), and I compleatly forgot to change the name on the sheets before posting.

Long story short, I'll go fix that...

Farore's Silent Realm...
Who else hated that one the most?
Try not to hate my arrangement as much as the Silent Realm...  :D

Is no one commenting on my arrangements 'cause there so good that you cant say anything bad, so you dont have anything left to say?

Yep.

I'll check 'em out on the weekend. :)

Groosinator is pretty good, these are the things I want to point out though:

-Every other note in the left hand needs to be a Db. It makes no sense to keep alternating between C's, plus it will look nicer.
-There is a staccato mark over a half rest in the left hand of measure 19. Delete it.
-The right hand part in measures 5, 11, 16, and 22 have an A# that needs to be a Bb.
-Measures 2 and 13's Gb's need to be F#.
-Title needs quotation marks.
-Delete the "Score" in the top left corner.
-Subtitle needs to be the same size as the composer ann arranger.
-Subtitle and arranger need to be Italicized.
-Composers need "Composition by" in front of there name.
-BPM is missing.
-The forte is in a weird spot-move it to the right until it's above the first note in the bass clef.
-The C# in measures 11 and 22 (RH) need to be a Db.


I don't really have this song memorized, so I'm only addressing the visual problems. I've herd this song maybe twice, so if you have a wrong note or rhythm I wouldn't know.

Olimar didn't you already do this?

Olimar was arranging "Groose's Theme" for me, not this. The song Goron arranged plays when The Imprisoned takes a Link to the knee by way of Groose's contraption.

Quote from: Bespinben on February 07, 2012, 08:22:46 PMOlimar was arranging "Groose's Theme" for me, not this. The song Goron arranged plays when The Imprisoned takes a Link to the knee by way of Groose's contraption.

I did finished my groose songs-you want me to post them somewhere for you, Bespinben?

 

Ive addressed Olimar's many problems, tweaked The Groosenator, and now its ready to go.  ;)

Quote from: Olimar12345 on February 03, 2012, 08:58:39 AMI don't really have this song memorized, so I'm only addressing the visual problems. I've herd this song maybe twice, so if you have a wrong note or rhythm I wouldn't know.

Here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rAfUIxWJoog&feature=related).

I havent check the forums all month (sorry, but the computers been havin problems) and yet no one has looked and mah sheets?

No one?




Anyone?

 :'(

That song is much more active than I remember...which means there's going to be more instructions from me about how to make your piece as close to the original as possible...

Well, here we go!

Formatting

-Subtitle needs to be size 12
-Copyright needs to go "Nintendo © 2011"

Left Hand

-On the recording, they seem to have big hits on the down beats-I would add an accent to all of the "C"'s in the left hand part.(just do it for one measure and Ctrl C+V)
-Measure 18 needs a hit on beat three-add an 8th note, two-octave "C" with an accent and a staccato.
-Measure 19 needs to be a quarter rest, then six 8th notes (C-Dbx3, in the previously stated style).

Right Hand

-Measure 2 needs to be:quarter rest, quarter note tied to an eighth note, then 3 eighth notes. Also only in the lower of the two octaves. (this also applies to measure 13)
-Measure 3

ARGH I have moar to say but I'm outta time! I'll post the rest later!

Then ill fix it when youve said everything

Pretty sure a lot of guests have been looking tho! :)

Yea!
 ;D

SMS is the abreveation for Super Mario Sunshine, right?

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on March 14, 2012, 12:04:29 PMSMS is the abreveation for Super Mario Sunshine, right?

Yeah, why not? Hi! I'm WarioMan.  :D I think I've never posted here, so here I am.

Just to say two things: The goron-eater dragon it's called Volvagia, not Volviga, and (stupid thing because I'm weird) the last two measures of your Final Battle from Sunshine are a bit bigger than the rest of the measures. Check that the percentage is 90, or the percentage you use. Great arrangements, by the way!  :)

Take a look at mines if you want too! : )

EDIT: Hmm... the same happens with your Volvagia Battle arrangement...

Percentige?

Percentage

Quote from: WarioMan98 on March 26, 2012, 09:55:17 AM...the last two measures of your Final Battle from Sunshine are a bit bigger than the rest of the measures. Check that the percentage is 90, or the percentage you use.

To my knowledge, Finale always does that. I don't know about other programs, but I know Finale does do that. I'm guessing this is to have it go to the end of the page like the other measures rather than end part way down the page, which looks visually unpleasant (at least to me).

Quote from: Ganondorf on March 28, 2012, 07:35:34 PMTo my knowledge, Finale always does that. I don't know about other programs, but I know Finale does do that. I'm guessing this is to have it go to the end of the page like the other measures rather than end part way down the page, which looks visually unpleasant (at least to me).

I could be wrong but I don't think it does that intentionally. I think it would rather resize the page to fit the page rather than a single system.

Dear Dad. Good luck at work, vrrm! :'(

You could speed that up a lot

How much?

Nvm I lied. HAHA so funny right? It's right. I clocked it at 78. Sorry :'(

lols

Nice arrangement of the Sand Sea (Past). I've really only 2 things to say about it: The piece is in E dorian, so the key signature should have 2 sharps. In measure 21 and 28, you'd have to use naturals to show the mixture, but that's a unique aspect, not the norm.
I think you could have under the second layer "L.H." the first four measure, then just have "sim." or similar after that. Kinda looks a little messy and if you don't get it by that point, then lol. It would also be fine to do that the entire piece I think, so you don't have odd swap backs during those sparse sections. Shows that one is pure accompaniment while the other is clear melody. It's not like doing that would be any difficult than anything else in the piece either, so yeah. Might wanna try that out.
Great arrangement overall. Keep pumping them out!

I'm pretty sure that this music takes place in the present...

Just want to say I've enjoyed each of your arrangements. Keep it up :D

Quote from: Dudeman on April 03, 2012, 11:26:31 AMI'm pretty sure that this music takes place in the present...

Both tracks are really quite similar, its just the past version has the constant beat.
Should I start the song as Past and at the end (without reapeat) blend into present, or are the two tracks to similar?

Quote from: pumpy_heart on April 03, 2012, 05:29:12 AMNice arrangement of the Sand Sea (Past). I've really only 2 things to say about it: The piece is in E dorian, so the key signature should have 2 sharps. In measure 21 and 28, you'd have to use naturals to show the mixture, but that's a unique aspect, not the norm.
I think you could have under the second layer "L.H." the first four measure, then just have "sim." or similar after that. Kinda looks a little messy and if you don't get it by that point, then lol. It would also be fine to do that the entire piece I think, so you don't have odd swap backs during those sparse sections. Shows that one is pure accompaniment while the other is clear melody. It's not like doing that would be any difficult than anything else in the piece either, so yeah. Might wanna try that out.
Great arrangement overall. Keep pumping them out!

Fixed

Quote from: GoronsOrchestrated on April 03, 2012, 07:58:22 PMBoth tracks are really quite similar, its just the past version has the constant beat.
Should I start the song as Past and at the end (without reapeat) blend into present, or are the two tracks to similar?

I would say name the piece "Lanayru Sand Sea", since the tracks don't have any important differences.

Some points I would like to point out:
-Can you remove the "fit measures" thing at page 2? It makes look the sheet a bit bad.
-Could you also sustain the left hand chords in bar 1-16? It sounds somewhat empty without it.
-Koji Kondo only composed a few tracks for this game, and that doesn't include this one.

Fixed to the best of my understanding.
Is that what you ment by:

Quote from: Bloop on April 04, 2012, 08:28:25 AM-Could you also sustain the left hand chords in bar 1-16? It sounds somewhat empty without it.

No, I actually meant this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi42.tinypic.com%2F34zf42p.png&hash=83b517e461d291e0c6931f9a30d5a7afb28b1a4d)

Sorry, I'm not the best at explaining.

Oh, okay. I'll see if I can come around to fixing that tonight.

Took a little longer that a expected, but fixed none the less, once again, to the best of my understanding.

Quote from: Zunawe on May 14, 2012, 04:56:42 PMstuff

Get your own thread please.

Did you ever see a more complicated temple?

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