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Quote from: mariolegofan on February 01, 2014, 09:45:55 AMExcellent work! Dude....you have got some skill :)
Keep up the good work

Quote from: mariolegofan on February 01, 2014, 09:47:57 AMNot sure about feedback right now....someone else could help you with that

Quote from: Bloop on February 01, 2014, 10:12:15 AMPreeetty good for a first arrangement if you ask me, at least it's better than my first (idk where it went, though).

A few things I felt like pointing out though. What Finale product do you use? If it's notepad, you probably won't be able to fix some the things I'll be pointing out right now ,__,

-The song is in F minor, which means that the key signature should have 4 flats instead of one.
-Make sure the G# in bar 28 is an Ab.
-The chord in bars 33-34 and 37-38 is an Abm, which means every B natural is an Cb, every D# is an Eb and every E is an Fb (both right and left hand)

-For reading purposes, it would be better to use an 8vb marking in the left hand at bar 23-24.
-Also put an 8va marking from the C in bar 28 to the Db in 29.

Quote from: Jompa on March 24, 2014, 07:35:35 AMThe key signature is C-minor. The Db is only there because it's in Phrygian mode.
A lot of your harmonies are wrong, most notable in that "mini-modulation" into F-phrygian in measures#9 and #10, where it seems you still think C is the tonal center. Just adjust it so the harmonies are the same intervals as earlier, just in the key of F instead of C.
There are more mistakes later on too, so I suggest you try doing the harmonies over again.

Quote from: JDMEK5 on March 24, 2014, 06:21:18 AMBecause of the perfectionist I am, you'll have to change the title to "Battle! Super-Ancient Pokémon".

Quote from: zoroark1264 on March 25, 2014, 06:51:03 PMB A AD BA F(NocturneofShadow),
I fixed the shadow font and I made them into italics instead.

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 25, 2014, 07:37:43 PMAwww, thanks :)

Quote from: rosabellis on May 09, 2014, 04:31:56 PMJust popping through here, I think you should use the official English name for Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Gates to Infinity instead of using the translated Japanese name. Speaking of that, someone should change the game name for the sheets already on the website.

Quote from: maelstrom. on September 27, 2014, 01:43:17 PMCouldn't resist

Nice arrangement, btw.  :)

Quote from: maelstrom. on September 29, 2014, 10:25:40 AMHe meant quotations. Like this: "Wii Shop Channel"

Quote from: Bloop on September 29, 2014, 07:47:12 AMI SAID I WOULD GIVE FEEDBACK

-Overall, there are lots of places where the rhythm grouping is incorrect. Go here (http://forum.ninsheetm.us/index.php?topic=4845.msg168866#msg168866) for information about what they are and how to make them correctly.
Also, try to add some staccato marks in the score. Staccato means to play a note shortly. The marking for this is under the articulation tool, it's the first one in the list.
-Add a double barline before every key change. This can be done with the measure tool.
About the key changes though, I believe the key changes to E major in measure 21, but I'm not sure about that.

-I believe the A's in measure 14 should be Bb's.
Change the D#'s, G#'s and A#'s into Eb's, Ab's and Bb's in measure 17-18. This makes it easier to read (also note: The D in the left hand should be an Eb)
Like measure 14, I believe the B's should be C's.

Also, the title has to be between parentheses. (quotation marks)

Quote from: braixen1264 on October 02, 2015, 06:45:35 PMUndertale
Fallen Down
I mostly need help with formatting/playability

Quote from: braixen1264 on October 02, 2015, 06:45:35 PMUndertale

Fallen Down
[MID] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/lpjdox8arbxcn7i/Fallen%20Down.mid?dl=0) [MUS] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/pomipoupe6anulm/Fallen%20Down.mus?dl=0) [MUSX] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/z1zte7qzkak1k3b/Fallen%20Down.musx?dl=0) [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/jp4pvdlo4m5287v/Fallen%20Down.pdf?dl=0) [Original] (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B69GfSqEZEs)

I mostly need help with formatting/playability

Quote from: braixen1264 on October 25, 2015, 06:49:20 PMI spent the last couple hours trying to make the OP as pretty as I could. Enjoy.

Quote from: dublincalif on October 29, 2015, 05:32:35 PMYou don't know how long I've been waiting for somebody to transcribe the wii shop channel theme. In fact I've tried to do it myself with no success at all. Much thanks to you!!

Quote from: Latios212 on November 12, 2015, 09:39:32 AMGo update Route 11 ;)

Quote from: braixen1264 on December 09, 2015, 07:41:27 PMPokémon Gold and Silver
Snowbelle City

Quote from: Zeila on December 10, 2015, 08:28:55 PMSorry, it should be dotted quarter = 63 as long as you half the note values (so three quarter notes ultimately turn into 1 dotted quarter)

Quote from: Dudeman on December 13, 2015, 07:10:20 PMHere's how I determine if a piece should be 3/4 or 6/8: It's all in how you count the beats.
3/4: 1 & 2 & 3 & 1 & 2 & 3 &
6/8: 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6

In this case, the beat counting in Snowbelle City is definitely the latter. If anyone has a good example of a 3/4 piece in X/Y to compare to, that would be a nice thing.

Quote from: SlowPokemon on December 16, 2015, 01:49:26 PMExamples of other XY tracks I'd write in 6/8:
Title Screen
Route 2
Dendemille Town
KISEKI
FIN

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Examples of other XY tracks I'd write in 3/4:
Vaniville Town
Camphrier Town
Surf
Laverre City
Kiloude City
Gogoat Shuttle
Shopping
Emma's Theme
Game Sync

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Hope that helps, Braixen! And there are also tracks like "Professor Sycamore's Theme" that could be written in either 6/8 or 3/4 because of the variability of the pulse.

Quote from: DonValentino on December 16, 2015, 02:26:01 PMHey, nice op~~

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 10, 2016, 08:06:33 PMwhy not have just secondo play the beginning

Formatting/notation stuff:

• I don't think the forward repeat sign is necessary at the beginning
• There are some beaming issues in the 6/8 section. If you did that because it's disconnected in the song, I think it would be better if you were to just use staccatos in p1 (or tenutos in p2) and beam them together (you defs should though in m36-37)
• You should put a double barline before every key/time sig change
• Along with adding dynamics to p2 (in multiple spots, like after diminuendos and stuff), I think it would be nice to have a crescendo in first 8 measures (or just m7/8), w/ m5 being written as a dynamic higher. Another spot where dynamic changes would be better or more accurate is m9
• I just barely noticed, but the piano marking at m38 should be aligned better
• Maybe you could hide the mp in m12 (p2)
• Why are there tied eighth notes on beat 3.5 like for example in m15? It's not wrong, it's just not necessary (you can keep it though)

Note stuff:

• You're missing some harmonies m5-8, and while you're at it, have the LH play the melody while the RH plays the chords at the higher register (p1)
• m9 sounds like octaves instead of chords (p1). Instead of having p2 play the octaves, have p1 do that while p2 starts with that pattern
• m10 (p1) is just the top note, and there's no way people are going to be able to play intervals that wide (p2). This might sound weird, but maybe you can lower the RH part and octave and have the LH play the lower layer and the whole notes
• There's an Ab in m16 and 18 beat 4.5 (RH p1), and you're missing two eighth notes and a quarter on the last two beats in m13, 15, 17, and 19
• The start of the 6/8 section is just thirds (p1) with the exception of the 2nd eighth note in m33, and I feel like the marimba part until m38 has an Eb on beats 2 and 4 instead of an F but I could be wrong. m36-37 are thirds instead of octaves
• I think you should remove the harmonies that conflict with the main melody (and also that C on the last measure) in p1