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Title: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Zeta on September 11, 2021, 10:57:58 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Drakengard/NieR
Game: NieR
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Halua
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291)
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Libera on September 11, 2021, 11:00:33 PM
This was unreleased on the original soundtrack.  The composer info is a very educated guess based on a) knowing the members of MONACA involved and b) knowing who arranged it on the ver.1.22474487139... soundtrack.

Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Kricketune54 on September 17, 2021, 10:23:31 PM
This is really quite beautiful- and quite straight forward haha.

Wondering if m24 RH warrants a roll on those notes- it sounded to me like there could be one there.

At m31, while there isn't a lot left of the song, I don't think it'd hurt to be faithful to the song and include a rit. starting at the eighth notes here.

At the fermatas, do you see any potential usage for some performance text saying something to the effect of "let the sound carry" or "fade out"?  I know fade out is probably not the right term and con pedale is already in the beginning, so maybe this is a redundant point.
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Libera on September 18, 2021, 12:06:23 AM
Wondering if m24 RH warrants a roll on those notes- it sounded to me like there could be one there.

At m31, while there isn't a lot left of the song, I don't think it'd hurt to be faithful to the song and include a rit. starting at the eighth notes here.

Sure.

At the fermatas, do you see any potential usage for some performance text saying something to the effect of "let the sound carry" or "fade out"?  I know fade out is probably not the right term and con pedale is already in the beginning, so maybe this is a redundant point.

Hmm, I'm not really sure this makes sense.  I think it's going to happen naturally and there's not much the performer can do besides the fermata which is already present.  I think I'll just leave it.



Thanks for having a look.  Files updated.
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Code_Name_Geek on September 23, 2021, 07:13:55 PM
I agree that this sounds really beautiful! One comment, I think there's another note happening above the bass on beat 1 of m. 12? I can't quite make out the pitch though, so my ears could be playing tricks on me.
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Latios212 on September 24, 2021, 12:02:11 AM
I agree that this sounds really beautiful! One comment, I think there's another note happening above the bass on beat 1 of m. 12? I can't quite make out the pitch though, so my ears could be playing tricks on me.
There's something there, it sounds like a B-D dyad in reach of the right hand.

Other than that, it sounds like there's a few harmony notes missing in m. 13 - Cn, D, A below the first few melody notes.

Not much else to say. Nice sheet :)
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Libera on September 24, 2021, 12:37:41 AM
Thanks for the help you two!  Files are updated.
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Latios212 on September 24, 2021, 12:39:27 AM
Nice :) I would just suggest flipping the tie between 11-12 up, away from the lower layer.

Nothing else from me, I shall approve
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Static on September 27, 2021, 01:03:04 AM
It's hard to find something wrong with this, but there are a few things that caught my attention:
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Libera on September 28, 2021, 08:08:36 PM
I made the suggested changes.  Thanks!
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Static on September 28, 2021, 09:22:05 PM
When you adjusted things, the D.C. got moved just a hair outside the right margin. Other than that, looks good
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Libera on September 28, 2021, 10:31:09 PM
Done.
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Static on September 28, 2021, 10:36:58 PM
Nice, I'll accept
Title: Re: [MUL] NieR - "Halua" by Libera
Post by: Zeta on September 28, 2021, 10:37:06 PM
This submission has been accepted by Static (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4960).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot