Quote from: Latios212 on April 06, 2025, 05:55:43 PMGreat sheet! Only thing I have to mention is m. 1 beat 3 LH: I hear an additional C above the Bb.I also hear that, added
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Show posts MenuQuote from: Latios212 on April 06, 2025, 05:55:43 PMGreat sheet! Only thing I have to mention is m. 1 beat 3 LH: I hear an additional C above the Bb.I also hear that, added
Quote from: Metamyrrh on March 29, 2025, 06:40:41 PMThis is such a soothing piece!I know right? Even in just 9 bars it has so much of that Mitsuda feeling to it.
Quote from: Metamyrrh on March 29, 2025, 06:40:41 PMIn beat 4 of measure 4, I hear a G in the right hand rather than an E.Did you mean measure 3? If so, I also hear G there, fixed.
Quote from: Metamyrrh on March 29, 2025, 06:40:41 PMNot a suggested change, just something I'm curious about: in measures 5 and 7, why did you use grace notes rather than a mordent?Good question; grace notes without a slash are meant to be played before the beat rather than on the beat like a mordent would. In the original track, the Eb and F are played before the next Eb in both RH and LH are played together. Hopefully that sort of makes sense
Quote from: goldenscruff on March 05, 2025, 11:39:19 PMm182 & m190 & 198 I'm not hearing the GnI still hear those spots as I have written. It's a bit harder to hear under the other instruments in m190/198 but it's the exact same string part as m177-184.
m187 & 195 I'm hearing Cn with the Gn, this might be undertones
m191 & 199 Again I can hear a Cn
m192 & m200 I don't hear an F# here.
m199 I don't hear a Bb
Quote from: goldenscruff on March 05, 2025, 11:39:19 PMm209-216 What are your thought's on dropping some of the LH notes to add in some of the horns. I think that would add more to the build up.The driving pedal bass is a large part of what gives m177-216 its sense of tension, which is then released in m217. I'd rather prioritize that than the harmony.
Quote from: goldenscruff on March 05, 2025, 11:39:19 PMm229 I think I hear the Dn written on b3.25 come in before the Horns. Could just be really slow attack of the hornsNo, that sounds right to me. The horns come in right on beat 4, and in m221 too. Fixed that, good catch.
Quote from: goldenscruff on March 05, 2025, 11:39:19 PMm247 I'm hearing a Gn in the LH not Fn. I also think the roll down to the bottom Cn is also too much to play at tempo.The Fn is a little tough to hear but I'm still hearing it there as part of that C7sus4, same as m239. Adjusted the LH to make it a bit more manageable.
Quote from: goldenscruff on March 05, 2025, 11:39:19 PMm290-291 I'm hearing some significant add2 (En) in this chord.Me too, added.
Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 04, 2025, 06:11:29 PMI still don't hear it, is it in the synth or guitar? If you're confident it's there then that's fine, it's not a huge deal.Sorry for the delay on this. Listening to it again today I don't hear the D anymore, so I changed it to E.
Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 01, 2025, 01:41:03 PMWhoops, I meant E instead of C (so just Eaug instead of E7#5)I think I still hear the D there, although there is also the E which I intentionally left out to thin out the chord a little.
Quote from: Whoppybones on January 25, 2025, 09:11:47 AMm17-24 - I hear a recurring A-F# violin every beat in the RH, and I don't think the C# comes in until m21. Also as a side note, the MIDI file quiets down the LH here, though I assume it's meant to be the other way round.The RH in this section was deliberately simplified so that part of the arrangement wouldn't sound too heavy. since the first phase is supposed to be a very gradual buildup. The important part was to keep the chord progression (F#m, A/C#, Dmaj7, Bm), so the individual notes were not a priority there. Not worried about the MIDI playback since like all my sheets, they're made primarily for performers, but I'll probably clean up the playback once I'm finished making any other edits to the sheet.
Quote from: Whoppybones on January 25, 2025, 09:11:47 AMm95-96 - Does the top F# wait until b3 of m96 to change?I hear it that way in the violin part, the F# to G# motion stands out particularly. The same happens in m32.
Quote from: Whoppybones on January 25, 2025, 09:11:47 AMm100/104 LH - I think it jumps back down to the E# like it does through most of the pieceThat part was taken from the in-game loop (around 2:30-2:44 in the video), where the bass voice does not go to E#. It actually stays on F# the whole time, while another bass voice moves to G for mm.99-100 and 103-104, so I wanted to emphasize that motion in the arrangement.
Quote from: Whoppybones on January 25, 2025, 09:11:47 AMm144/152 RH - b4 the C plays again here as wellYep I hear it too but I wanted to emphasize the C-Bb-A-Bb motion, so I intentionally left it out.
Quote from: Whoppybones on January 25, 2025, 09:11:47 AMm251/252 RH - It might be good to drop the chord an octave to reflect the octave drop in the original.Good idea, changed that.
Quote from: Whoppybones on January 25, 2025, 09:11:47 AMm278-281 LH - It seems to be more heavily accented on b1 and b3 through these measures rather than the pattern of prior measures.The bass drum plays on b.1/3 there but I wanted to emphasize the string rhythms there, especially continuing into m.278 where the RH switches to the tremolo. I realized I started the tremolo too early, in m.276, so I adjusted that as well.
Quote from: Whoppybones on January 25, 2025, 09:11:47 AMI'd say I can't wait to play the finished version, but I don't know that I ever will. This is a very difficult piece, but boy is it impressive!Thank you, and thanks for the feedback!
Quote from: Radiak488417 on January 15, 2025, 09:12:28 PMm33 & m35 RH beat 4.75: I hear a C instead of a D here.I already have both a C and D there unless you meant somewhere else?
Quote from: Radiak488417 on January 15, 2025, 09:12:28 PMm34 & m36 RH beat 3. I hear a low G# (and maybe a C?) here.Yup I hear that too
Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on August 05, 2024, 05:51:25 PMI'm ecstaticHey I used the same pun on my first update post, things have truly come full circle...
Quote from: Kricketune54 on July 29, 2024, 07:39:45 AM• m28 RH 1.0 would this be a Cn instead of An?I chose the notes I did to fill out the chord since it sounds better imo. For m27-42 and m61-80, the upper two voices are the vocals and the lower voice(s) are notes I picked out from the background harmony that would be both comfortable to play and help fill out the chord. It's hard to tell if there is another lower voice that follows the melody, but either way I would prefer to fill out the chords than transcribe it verbatim.
• m70 RH I hear the bottom note is a lower octave of the current top note of each of these half notes (En beat 1, F# beat 3)
Quote from: Kricketune54 on July 29, 2024, 07:39:45 AM• m79 RH 4.5 you could add that higher D# that plays, maybe correct it to En? Could add the pedal marks here to accomplish thisThat sounds good, added
Quote from: Kricketune54 on July 27, 2024, 08:24:05 PMOkay, I think I understand which note it is representing now, but it seems like a kind of weird inclusion to me. Like I would think if there was more incorporation of background parts, there would be the Gn that's struck on beat 1.25 every time for figures like m1 or m2.The Cn is playing in the same background synth part that I included throughout the arrangement (the one that plays on beat 2, 3, 4, 4.75), it's basically meant to fill out the chord there (D7). The bass part also plays Cn there. The G on beat 1.25 of those measures is from the arpeggiated part that I wrote down starting in m17, which I didn't want to include in m1-16 so I could prioritize the other parts.
Quote from: Kricketune54 on July 25, 2024, 08:01:15 AM• m6, m14 RH 3.0 I don't hear this CnI still hear it in one of the background parts, though I guess it's a bit quieter than the rest
Quote from: Kricketune54 on July 25, 2024, 08:01:15 AM• m36 LH beat 2.75 should this shift to Ab and then all of the rest of the notes be Ab until beat 4.75's Fn?That's actually in a different part where the G# is played on beat 3, but I think it would sound better in the arrangement to do that so I changed it. Added the attack on beat 3 to line up with the G# but also to mimic the drum fill there.
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