Ok got everything updated but these:
- On m46/50 LH beat 2, I would suggest using F# instead of B. The B is already held by the RH, and the B feels too high to me, i.e. it sounds like the low register is lost. (Might also apply to m62 LH beat 2 if you want to use D instead of G, but I think this one is also fine as is because it's lower than m46/50.)
- m47 LH beat 4 seems like it should use G instead of F#; F# isn't part of the chord here.
-It sounds very abrupt for the octave to jump so suddenly from m62 LH beat 4 to m63 LH beat 1. I would suggest either raising m62 LH beats 4-4.5 an octave or lowering m63 LH an octave, i.e. pick an octave and stick with it.
For that B, I can hear it and it sounds not as full without it, so I just added F# and kept the B.
For m47, I still disagree. I relistened to it and I still cant hear that chord resolving properly.
for m62, I raised the 4.5 an octave but kept 4 the same so its not as much of a jump. Let me know if this works cause for me at least I think the lower octave for beat 4 sounds really nice and still is playable.
Thank you!
