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[[3DS] Bravely Default]

IIIIT'S UPDATE TIME!

It's almost the autumn/spring equinox, so why not have some sheets to mark the occasion?

[3DS] Bravely Default
"Baby Bird" by Libera

[PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari)
"Oppression" by Olimar12345

[Wii] Cave Story (WiiWare)
"Balcony" by Olimar12345

[GBA] Fire Emblem
"Black Fang" by Libera

[3DS] Fire Emblem Awakening
"Id (Sorrow)" by Maelstrom

[GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue
"Acorn Trail/Sea Spray Park" by Altissimo

[SNES] Kirby Super Star
"Bubbly Clouds" (Replacement) by Yug Guy
"Cocoa Cave" (Replacement) by Yug Guy

[NDS] Kirby: Squeak Squad
"Prism Plains" by Dekkadeci

[PC] La-Mulana (2005)
"Mr. Explorer" by FugalOmen

[NDS] Mario Kart DS
"Nintendo WFC Menu" by LeviR.star

[MUL] NieR: Automata
"Birth of a Wish" by Maelstrom

[SWITCH] Octopath Traveler
"Battle II" by Latios212

[NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time & Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Darkness
"Hidden Land" (Replacement) by InsigTurtle & Altissimo
"Mt. Bristle" by FiveNineSquared

[GBA] Pokémon Ruby Version & Pokémon Sapphire Version
"Sealed Chamber (Duet)" by JDMEK5

[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess
"Twilight Realm" by Renaud Bergeron

[N64] Yoshi's Story
"Ending Story" (Replacement) by Latios212
"Love is in the Air" by hamishbrown

[PC] Yume Nikki
"Flute Player" by Rwars

Uploaded files with some quick cautionary accidentals added and Libera's beam twerks

For m.10,11, etc. I'm thinking you try the chimes transposed into a different register to add some interest instead. I'm not too much of a fan of m.14/16, but if you decide to keep them in, perhaps you could add some way of conveying that those notes are not as important as the ones before

Couple of things to add on:
m.20-23 guitar part - instead of some of the quarter notes and eighth rests you have, i hear the guitar part going back down to that A.
m.25-32 spelling - i think it'd make more sense for the B#'s to be C's instead (thinking more modally here instead, and it makes the parallel fifths motion from m.28-29 more clear. as well, m.32's treble clef is essentially just one diminished seventh chord, so i don't think there's any need to respell the D# as Eb halfway through

I was using them as phrase marks, so the performer would be able to interpret the way the melody flows. Although I get your point about the visual effect, I don't find it too cluttering (for piano, at least)

ah, i forgot to comment about that
i tried moving it that way, but it looked weird to me, so i moved it the other way

Made some edits

Whoopsies were fixed

Glad to see you still drop by sometimes

If you can't do them in Notepad, you can ask one of us updaters to do it for you. Again, it's just a suggestion

Oh, sorry, 35-36 was my bad. For some reason, my PDF viewer was only viewing one page at a time and I scrolled to the next page while still counting measures, so I accidentally (and incorrectly) double counted 31-32.

For the end, I'm thinking you could use so-called "Ravel ties" to make it easier to read,

(image stolen from here just for illustration purposes)

It looks cleaner, but the downside is that it's harder to do in notation programs and it might not play back correctly in the program.

(also some people debate its validity but it gets the point across so why not)

Pretty good, some quick comments:
m.27 last LH note should be Bb, not C
m.31-32, 35-36 D#'s should be Eb's
m.67 LH sounds like it should be D G B D instead of G B C D (also curious as to why you decided to transpose it up and make the LH crossover instead of tranposing it down)
End chords could be a bit fuller

Aight, that's cool. I just had to double check that you were consciously making those decisions, just in case

Only issue I'm noticing is beat 1.5 of m.3, that E is pretty difficult for a regular piano player to hit with the A. In m.1, it's fine because you have the LH to help out, but here it's not too easy unless you pedal to keep the B in the bass going. So you should try to add an indication to a performer so they know how exactly they should play that (unless you want them to decide for themselves, in which case the current version is fine)

Just a couple of things I noticed:
m.6,8 - Eb's should be D#'s
m.14 - Here, it sounds like the part in the LH should be louder than or on top of the RH part