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I knew someone was eventually going to request it.  I'd do it myself, but I'm already doing a few songs and that rhythm early on is hard.  But someone should do it!

That was fast! Do we choose the next one by poll?

Banned for not reading the posts on the page.

I was actually asking how MLF's promised feedback on my latest piece was coming as a reminder, not on the quality of my feedback. But thanks anyway.

Jordan (me) is not having a good day at all. I could go into detail but I can sum it up into one statement:

I work at Wal-mart.

Ouch. Are you the only competent person in the store?

I'll just list the keys and errors I see and you decide if a key change is necessary
Gm
5-6 A Harmonic minor (but starts on E -- called something werid)
7 should have naturals and flats
The key is actually be D harmonic Minor for at least 9-18
The 19 key change looks like E harmonic minor (or melodic)
And try to be more consistent with choosing sharps or flats. If the key is not changing, you should not have to use many of the other.

And this is not really the song that would make someone think, "Wow! This would make a great piano piece!" But you did a good job with it nevertheless. And there were a few note barring errors at the beginning and end, but you should be able to fix those pretty easily.

And how's my feedback coming?

His arrangements were always great, but I wish he would do some more that weren't PMD

....And face the fact that Yugi's song/poem has bad grammar.

You wish you knew, but you don't.

Stop lying to yourself and face the truth.

You wish....

Regarding the upcoming Great Ace Attorney:

"According to Game Jouhou, the famous sleuth will be joined by his famous sidekick Watson, who will be an 8-year old girl as opposed to a strapping male adult."

Just finished Dual Destinies. That was one good ending.

Spoiler

But I wish I could have seen the phantom's face..... 

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Banned for excessive plagiarism