Nearly there! Last few things I'm noticing...
- m. 28 (RH): sixth note sounds like A#, not F#. Would spell the B# as Cn since we're entering G major next.
- m. 29 (LH): beat 3.5 sounds like Gn.
- m. 30 (LH): Most places you have swung eighths aligned with triplets (good) but beat 2.5 here is off.
- m. 31 (RH): Beat 4 sounds inverted, like the top Eb should be moved an octave down.
- m. 34 (RH): seems pretty hard to play, possibly omit the middle voice in the beat 1 triplet?
Anyway, I'd recommend re-checking the chords in the last system, as a few of them don't sit too well for me (like that B natural in 34, but idk).
- m. 28 (RH): sixth note sounds like A#, not F#. Would spell the B# as Cn since we're entering G major next.
- m. 29 (LH): beat 3.5 sounds like Gn.
- m. 30 (LH): Most places you have swung eighths aligned with triplets (good) but beat 2.5 here is off.
- m. 31 (RH): Beat 4 sounds inverted, like the top Eb should be moved an octave down.
- m. 34 (RH): seems pretty hard to play, possibly omit the middle voice in the beat 1 triplet?
Anyway, I'd recommend re-checking the chords in the last system, as a few of them don't sit too well for me (like that B natural in 34, but idk).