Messages

- One thing that always bugs me is the use of staccato'd dotted notes (both visually and from the standpoint of someone reading). There's a clear pause in between the first two bass notes, so use a rest there.
- Dotted half notes will make page 2 look neater.
- In measures 8 and 9 the stems are overlapping the repeat numbers a little bit. If that's a hassle for you I or someone else can get that for you.

Page 2:
- Remember, top layer's stems gotta point up.
- Stay consistent with 4-measure systems.

Also fill in the copyright info.

In measure 10, the last note in the right hand is a quarter note. Do you think there should be fingerings one the sixteenth notes at 44 in the right hand? I know other songs don't do this but some people (me) would use a song like this to learn how to play repeated notes fast with one hand and if they don't have a teacher to teach them, fingerings would help.

Thanks for the feedback! Fixed the quarter note, and fingerings won't hurt there so why not.

[[3DS] Fire Emblem Fates]

[3DS] Fire Emblem Fates
"Title Screen": NEW!
[MUS] [Original]

7.8/10 too much water

(I found out Echo had arranged it too right after I finished it. Oops. It's basically the same.)

I'm starting Birthright

right now

"robbed of a one thousand dollars dollars"

Me? Nope, never. I bring my own candy.

Done with finals! Then I promptly went and bought some stuff...

Ready for summer.

[close]

I'll get back on submissions and stuff after I'm done playing games soon!

when do we vote

Hi, welcome to NSM! I can't remember the last time we put any Star Fox up...

I don't have the time to check over everything musically right now, but this looks really solid! Couple of quick things:
- The text formatting on the .mus file is a little off, but anyone around with Finale will be able to help you out.
- I'd spend a little time experimenting with clef changes/cross-staff notation. It's definitely not bad as is right now, but I think some parts could be written a little clearer.
- Game title should be "Star Fox Zero", just as you have in the submission title, without the colon.
- You can change your arranger name by editing your forum profile so your submission will match your sheet (not your forum username).
- Difficulty's not a problem here. Looks perfectly playable to me.
- I think there's a few chords that should be rolled that aren't currently notated to do so.
- Should there be a repeat sign at the end?

I've got time. Noc yourself out.

noc is correct because he said 80 first

6) Support each other and keep each other accountable.

Congratulations, you are now accountable for my health

Anything I do from this point onwards, it's your fault

[[GB] Super Mario Land]

Sure thing, thanks!

"I like how the only good songs in this soundtrack are the ones without kazoos"
~Everyone

Basically.

And now, for another replacement that's just been sitting on my computer.

[GB] Super Mario Land
"Marine Pop, Sky Pop!": NEW!
[MUS] [Original]

I bought it a few months ago and just started playing it

I'm on mobile so I can't see if TMP changed this or not, but you use a double dotted half note in measure 10. That would be helpful in other places too.