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Thanks again for the help but I think, as Tobbeh99 said: "I'ts good that you added a dynamic. The specific places I'm thinking about are: Places such as measure 9-10 when "the guitar strums more", I feel like it could be a bit louder, maybe add forte/crescendo in measure 9 and in measure 10 a diminuendo. And the "whistle" part, I think could be a bit softer, piano."

Olimar12345 that was amazing! I'll add the dynamics and it should be perfect!
PS: I have the right to use your sheet... right? 
PSS: You uploaded the .mus file twice instead of the .pdf. 

Well I can erase the finale then... 

That's what I meant. Before measure 80 it is the original and after that there is the "optional finale".

It is the from the original. I just added a more "ragtime" optional finale.

[OK I fixed these problems. I hope it's fine now!]

OK I fixed these problems. I hope it's fine now! 

[Alright, I change it to 2/4. I hope there are no mistakes made from the conversion...]

Alright, I change it to 2/4. I hope there are no mistakes made from the conversion...

Oh yes my mistake.  But are you sure? mariolegofan said it's in 4/4.

Yes, it is.

*bump* Is there another imperfection...?

[Thanks for the positive comment! I made the changes you said and I hope it's good now.]

Thanks for the positive comment! I made the changes you said and I hope it's good now. 

[Alright, I changed it. Anything else?]

Alright, I changed it. Anything else? 

For reference:

So is there another change I should make? 

[I tried to improve these chords. I hope they are OK now.]

I tried to improve these chords. I hope they are OK now.