So I totally didn't realize I had gotten feedback and now I feel stupid. Anyway, I'll try and mention all the changes (if I don't quote something, it probably means I did it and don't have anything to say about it)
Now that I'm going through this, I'm wondering if maybe I should do a full transcription so I have something to base this off of...
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 24, 2024, 08:49:14 PM• The tempo is in a different font than the current templates (Maestro Times and Times New Roman are what they should be for notehead and bpm # respectivelyI just had the default Finale stuff, hopefully it should be good now.
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 24, 2024, 08:49:14 PM• m19 1.0 and 4.0, and m20 3.0 the Dn sounds slightly longer, could remove the staccato, or add an accent as well? Would apply also for m23 and 24 same spotsYeah, the thirds aren't there. My bad
• For these same mentioned measures as well, also not hearing the parallel thirds underneath the notes.
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 24, 2024, 08:49:14 PM• m37 RH you could add the fall on beat 2.0 (the Gn). Could have it end before beat 3, but I also can understand excluding it given the notes on beat 3 LH. You could alternatively write beat 2 RH as a sextuplet (5 notes) - Gn, F#, En Dn C# or all notes after G I mentioned as grace notes. Could do something like this sheet: https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/5267 m19 RH before beat 3 for example.I added a glissando for this, which should work just as well
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 24, 2024, 08:49:14 PM• m58-62 LH I do wonder if this part is a bit excessive - just listening to playback and midi with the collective LH's I have a hard time hearing the RH melody for Piano 1 here (though admittedly I had a hard time when removing any notes). I would lightly suggest removing the bottom An octave just so it's not three low octaves of An in the LH between both pianos. Feel free to stick with if you'd like for another updater opinion, but I do think there's a bit too much An at the moment here.That's a fair point, fixed
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 24, 2024, 08:49:14 PM• m49 RH hearing grace notes as En and FnIt's actually D-En-Fn, but fixed regardless
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 24, 2024, 08:49:14 PM• m59 LH 4.5 hearing as CnTurns out I had both of these parts completely wrong. Should be fixed now.
• m61 1.0 hearing En, 1.5 An. 4.5 also as Cn
Now that I'm going through this, I'm wondering if maybe I should do a full transcription so I have something to base this off of...